The shorties rule this fic, maaaayn - TaeSun and even a bit of HyoSun there. Sunny’s little blurts remind me of Yuri’s tendency to talk to herself. LOL
TaeSun… Man, do they know how to tease each other. LOL I didn’t notice it right away after reading the whole thing once, but after looking at it one more time, I realized there’s more to it than just a simple conversation between them. I’m talking about the part where Taeng and Sunny are in their room by the way. The butt slap in the kitchen, however, I don’t consider subtle at all. whaha Also, I like that you used the word “companion” to describe what Sunny is to Taeng instead of using “friend” or “member”. ;D
Now, for the “other party”… I kinda feel bad for Hyomin here. She just sort of got ignored by Sunny when Taeyeon’s around. I mean, Sunny didn’t even read the second message that she got from Hyomin. She just put her cellphone in her back pocket without even looking at it. It’s as if she was putting Hyomin in the backseat and focusing on Taeyeon at that time because she was there physically. That’s just my take on it though. Playah playah!! LOL
Hmmm… You actually included a bit of the other pairings, too. Clever. “Yoona and Yuri were throwing cereal to each other while giggling their hearts out…” Aaah! YoonYul! :D There’s also JeTi (indirect).
Honestly, I quite enjoyed reading this piece. I hope you continue writing, author. The conversations were a blast to read, and the imagery very effective; it's as if I was right there, watching while all this was happening. The thing that I like most about this fic is that it's open to interpretations. It made me think and ask questions, which are coming up by the way. At the same time, this characteristic serves as a double-edged sword because IT FREAKING MADE MY HEAD HURT. I joke. XD
…………………………….......... So, what really is the deal between Sunny and Taeyeon? Does Taeyeon know about Hyomin in this fic? And did she know that it was Hyomin who was texting/messaging/whatev Sunny at that time? Is that why she offered Sunny the jelly? Or was that purely by chance? Gah, author, I’m gonna get a headache from reading into this too much, but I can’t freaking help it if you leave so much deets out. My imagination is running wild with the possibilities. Ugh.
....................... To the person who proofread this: I may have caught some “things” that might or might not have slipped through the cracks. XDD ****** “Hyoyeon stick out her tongue to imply that Sunny’s glare didn’t scare her.” ****** “…girl that loves to cling unto her.”
HAHAHAHA yes, dear! You've caught my intention for this fic. As this is a "real life" interpretation, of course Taeyeon knows of Hyomin's presence in Sunny's life. I did take the advantage of assumption that Taeyeon is accustomed to that special ringtone that Sunny has for Hyomin.
the deal between sunny and taeyeon? closer than friends less than a lover, which is also the reason why i use "companion" instead 8D
Taeyeon's offer to Sunny was actually something casual, but it actually made Sunny choose betwen Taeyeon and Hyomin. ;_;
see, i was quite sad when I made this, but I'm happy with the ending... i need to brb and super-glue my sunbyung heart now
TaeSun… Man, do they know how to tease each other. LOL I didn’t notice it right away after reading the whole thing once, but after looking at it one more time, I realized there’s more to it than just a simple conversation between them. I’m talking about the part where Taeng and Sunny are in their room by the way. The butt slap in the kitchen, however, I don’t consider subtle at all. whaha Also, I like that you used the word “companion” to describe what Sunny is to Taeng instead of using “friend” or “member”. ;D
Now, for the “other party”… I kinda feel bad for Hyomin here. She just sort of got ignored by Sunny when Taeyeon’s around. I mean, Sunny didn’t even read the second message that she got from Hyomin. She just put her cellphone in her back pocket without even looking at it. It’s as if she was putting Hyomin in the backseat and focusing on Taeyeon at that time because she was there physically. That’s just my take on it though. Playah playah!! LOL
Hmmm… You actually included a bit of the other pairings, too. Clever. “Yoona and Yuri were throwing cereal to each other while giggling their hearts out…” Aaah! YoonYul! :D There’s also JeTi (indirect).
Honestly, I quite enjoyed reading this piece. I hope you continue writing, author. The conversations were a blast to read, and the imagery very effective; it's as if I was right there, watching while all this was happening. The thing that I like most about this fic is that it's open to interpretations. It made me think and ask questions, which are coming up by the way. At the same time, this characteristic serves as a double-edged sword because IT FREAKING MADE MY HEAD HURT. I joke. XD
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So, what really is the deal between Sunny and Taeyeon? Does Taeyeon know about Hyomin in this fic? And did she know that it was Hyomin who was texting/messaging/whatev Sunny at that time? Is that why she offered Sunny the jelly? Or was that purely by chance? Gah, author, I’m gonna get a headache from reading into this too much, but I can’t freaking help it if you leave so much deets out. My imagination is running wild with the possibilities. Ugh.
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To the person who proofread this: I may have caught some “things” that might or might not have slipped through the cracks. XDD
****** “Hyoyeon stick out her tongue to imply that Sunny’s glare didn’t scare her.”
****** “…girl that loves to cling unto her.”
Peace.
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the deal between sunny and taeyeon? closer than friends less than a lover, which is also the reason why i use "companion" instead 8D
Taeyeon's offer to Sunny was actually something casual, but it actually made Sunny choose betwen Taeyeon and Hyomin. ;_;
see, i was quite sad when I made this, but I'm happy with the ending... i need to brb and super-glue my sunbyung heart now
thanks for reading ♥
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