Fic: "Balancing Act" (1/8) (Doctor/Donna, Doctor Who)

[ageless_aislynn]

Title: "Balancing Act" (1/8)
Author: ageless_aislynn
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Ten/Donna
Summary: Donna has managed to save both herself and her memories but in doing so, has she bitten off more than she...and the Doctor...can chew? An alternate end to "Journey's End."
Rating: NC-17 (series); This chapter, hard R (for adult content and language)
Length: 2

Comments

[shining_moment]

Oh but I totally *love* this and I love that there are apparently 6 more chapters of such delights :)

She kissed the receiver back. Too cute.

[ageless_aislynn]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it! *happy dances* Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥!

[welshred]

'She automatically looked down. Yes, indeed, all of the motion was doing wonders for her anatomy. "Well, what do you want me to do? Take 'em off? They're not exactly detachable! Just stop looking!" '
This part is hilarious!

OMG I LOVE this!! It's *so* them, and I was LOL'ing at most of it. Cannot wait for more!

[ageless_aislynn]

Eee, thanks so much! I'm really so glad that you thought it sounded like them and that it gave you some LOLZ, which were two things I was really hoping to hear! :D Thanks so very much for reading and commenting! :D ♥!

[ageless_aislynn]

Hee, yep, the sexxins just refused to be contained in 5 chapters (which were, uh, 4 at the start o_O ;) ) so I had to add in another one. ;)

Thank you again SOOOOOO much! I would've tossed this off the top of 10 story building, ran it over with a steam-roller a few times, then set it on fire and scattered the ashes if it weren't for you! *supa!smishes*

*gives you a sexay Time Lord of your choice (or, you know, if you want more than one, feel free 'cause you know I'm all about making dreams come true ;) ) and a HUGE gift basket of cookies!* ♥♥♥!!!

[ageless_aislynn]

*squee!* I'm so glad you liked it! *happy dances* I have to say, I definitely wouldn't have minded this type of ending AT ALL, lol! (Though I guess it's a much more "Torchwood" type ending than the usual DW one... ;) )

The next chapter has already been sent out for beta'ing so should hopefully be ready to be posted in a few days! Thanks SO much for reading and commenting! ♥!

[ageless_aislynn]

Aw, thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm also so glad that you're rooting for them, too! ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥!