you finished it! \o/alreadyOctober 12 2008, 02:43:27 UTC
and I LOVE IT.
it's so raw and sensual and damn i love your characterization in this. jaejoong is so wild and fierce. and that bit about yunho taking over control made me smile in triumph :D
the whole banter throughout the sex was A+, and you managed to put humor in between the scenes that's supposed to be dark. the snark was amusing to read.
and i lovelovelove the ending, you satisfy the fluffy side in me. i'm such a sucker for good endings x))
He’s almost scared at how caring it sounds, nothing like the paternalistic shit guards give inmates all the time; and he sees Jaejoong’s eyes widen a little, then soften, then go back to their usual sly and calculating look. PERFECT ♥
*adds to mem* ugh i love it, will reread again. thanks for this Hoshi x)♥♥♥♥
Re: you finished it! \o/crux_australisOctober 12 2008, 11:31:29 UTC
igskljskjhls Went for short hols in Sydney and came back to this. ♥ Jaejoong is a beautiful man. Mrgph~ And you are beautiful for emphasizing that. He has a huge penis and amazing muscles and broad shoulders and a deep voice and gjslghshga being Yunho-sexual doesn't make him a sissy girl. xD
Re: you finished it! \o/age_of_dreamsOctober 12 2008, 11:58:29 UTC
Ireneeeee ♥♥♥ I'm relieved glad you like it x3
I didn't want to make any of them clearly "dominant"... since yunho is the "authority" here, and Jae is tied up, it would've been easier to make Jae more submissive, but... fierce!Jae is so much more fun to write XDDD I just can't bring myself to make him really submissive <.<
*cough*
Eeeee, the banter was kind of hard to write, but also the most interesting part, for me XDv
(I'm a sucker for good endings too. I was going to make them not care about each other at all but then.. it slipped in xDDDDD;;)
it's so raw and sensual and damn i love your characterization in this. jaejoong is so wild and fierce. and that bit about yunho taking over control made me smile in triumph :D
the whole banter throughout the sex was A+, and you managed to put humor in between the scenes that's supposed to be dark. the snark was amusing to read.
and i lovelovelove the ending, you satisfy the fluffy side in me. i'm such a sucker for good endings x))
He’s almost scared at how caring it sounds, nothing like the paternalistic shit guards give inmates all the time; and he sees Jaejoong’s eyes widen a little, then soften, then go back to their usual sly and calculating look.
PERFECT ♥
*adds to mem* ugh i love it, will reread again. thanks for this Hoshi x)♥♥♥♥
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Yeah, Jaejoong is most definitely a man (as beautiful as he is), and I'll never get tired of emphasizing it XDD Someone has to do it, after all =.=;
Agreed on everything. Especially on the huge penis ;P
ahahaha and don't worry about the comment, I've replied in the wrong place several times too xDDD
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I didn't want to make any of them clearly "dominant"... since yunho is the "authority" here, and Jae is tied up, it would've been easier to make Jae more submissive, but... fierce!Jae is so much more fun to write XDDD I just can't bring myself to make him really submissive <.<
*cough*
Eeeee, the banter was kind of hard to write, but also the most interesting part, for me XDv
(I'm a sucker for good endings too. I was going to make them not care about each other at all but then.. it slipped in xDDDDD;;)
♥♥♥!!!
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