[ JongKey ] The Trouble with Boys ( Part 1/2 )

[agapic]

Title: The Trouble with Boys (1/2)
Rating: PG-13/R
Word Count: ~5,800
Pairing: Jonghyun x Key
Genre: Drama, romance, some fluff
Warnings: A lot of cursing, some slight sexual situations
Summary: Key wants to confess, but can’t. The fact that the rest of SHINee won’t stop interfering in matters really doesn’t help. At all.
Notes: I apologize for the length

Comments

[pwoth]

I need MOOAAARRR. ;__;
Poor Key, has to suffer so much :(
but..UPDATE SOON. PLEAASSSEEEE.

[agapic]

LOL. Yes, he is suffering, for now. But soon enough things will be resolved. I am so bad at writing unhappy endings D;

[xxqod]

"He looked like a normal twenty-year-old boy, with two (maybe three?) pimples threatening to show near his jaw line"
lol! that I find funny xD Did you also see it in the pictures? xD It draws attention xD

"Key just scoffed at him and wrote him off as being a typically heterosexual male. That being, emotionally handicapped and just plain dumb about ninety-five percent of the time."
ROFLMAO!

Onew being the sangtae dubu leader talking to Key xD He always gets into the sticky situations!
And I was falling off my chair when the others began to set them up XD the bedroom lock up was the best xD
Key's behaviour is always daebak XD
He confessed! I really love it when he snaps xD
Ah, I hope Jonghyun will like him too, but I doubt it xD
can't wait for the next part!:)
<3 ~~

[agapic]

Hee. Yes. I swear, those buys debuted right in the throes of puberty. There is no way they naturally look perfectly fresh-faced with NO pimples or oily skin or awkward breakouts, ALL THE TIME. Like, no way. D:

And yes, gotta love Dubu attempting to be leader-esque. I think he manages, though in a really sweet, passive sort of way. He's too cute :3

Haha, the confession scene was the easiest to write. I loved writing it the best two. The next (final) chapter will be mostly Jjong POV and it will resolve everything. Yay~

Thank you so much for reading!! :)

[jelliemonster]

SPOT!

I must read now and come back later to comment. :D

[agapic]

HAHA. I like JUST read the new chapter of the fic you posted too xD And yay, someone's spotting me ;__;

[jelliemonster]

aigoo! Wait.. I finished reading?? umm, wait I still can't *breathe*

OMG! You should continue this one alright?? You see, I'm not a JongKey fan. Not a fan at all! I have a GREAT bias on my OTP (OnKey) and I always though Jonghyun is somewhat like... I don't know. haha XD in other words JongKey is far from my liking~~~ I still like Jong as an individual though... umm, anyway...

I still read though, and I'm glad I did! it's just so great I WANT MORE!! haha XD I'm definitely gonna follow your stories :DDDDD

update them soon okay? :)

[agapic]

Hehe! I'm glad I got you to like it even though you don't like the pairing. Personally, I love Jongkey and Onkey about equally, because I think both of them bring out different sides in Key, and as if my Key bias isn't terribly obvious enough already >__>

Thanks for the review though! :D And I'm currently halfway done with the 2nd part of the Onkey story I started so that will definitely be more to your liking, hehe~

[eaves106]

“Is it some hyung of ours? You’re always going on about older men and crap like that; I don’t really get it. It’s like, so what if they’re older? Younger guys probably have more energy in the sack, and you seem like you’d be demanding in bed.”

That made me crack up...and then I felt weird because I was laughing in an awkward place -shifts eyes-

Anyway, I love this! So many stories (okay, maybe just one or two) about Key and Jonghyun's secret love relationship behind the SHINee PR XD

&&I normally say this in an Onkey pairing, but poor Onew! (I think it's a given that anytime Key interacts with Onew, Onew is always harassed, haha!)

Ooo, and I don't care what others think about the whole BFFery with Jongkey, I think BFF's can turn into a couple >.<

Can't wait for the second part! Mmkay, I gotta get out of this socially awkward place so people don't think I'm crazy XD

[agapic]

Haha, yes. I liked that line too. So seemed like something Jjong would say. :P Glad it made you laugh! And I totally know what you mean about the whole laughing at fic in a public place thing... Done that too many times to count.

And I love Onkey interactions. I really do. It's so hard for me to pick between the two pairings~

I like Onkey because they are SO like an old married couple, with Key being the controlling nagging wife and Onew being the sweet, adorable, passive husband. And I like Jongkey because Jjong probably is one of the few people immune to Key's...occasionally bitchastic personality. :P Also, Jjong is such a BOY, and Key is such a GIRL, I love it.

Thanks for reading!!

[eaves106]

Lmao! It gets embarrassing sometimes. But whatever, those people don't know what I'm laughing at!!!

Haha, ahhh! I get it now! I get why I love Onkey and Jongkey so much (with your explanation) XD Jongkey is my OTP, tho, as of now =D

Haaaa, and yes, Key is so awesomely fantastic. Such bias >.< but Key deserves it 'cause he's so almighty <3

[kiwifresh]

Ahhh LOVEEEED this!
I apologize in advanced if this is a really shitty comment because I'm really bad at commenting fics xD I usually just sit and read, but I really liked this! :D

I can't wait for the next part! JONGKEY FTW<333

[agapic]

Aw, thanks for the comment! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well :)