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LC#1 - How To Love, PG (Teacher)

Apr 19, 2011 07:28

ENTRY 1, LONG CHALLENGE 1

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/theme: teacher, character: gwen, character: arthur, .challenge: long (submissions), writer: rosalyn, rating: k (9+), character: merlin, character: morgana

Comments 3

nurse_stiney April 18 2011, 23:12:11 UTC

Awesome use of the "Teacher" prompt. Though--and I hope I don't sound offensive--the writing style was a bit simplistic/almost fairytale-like? I'm not sure if that was what the author was going for. Otherwise, a lovely story!!

ella_rose88 April 19 2011, 00:42:36 UTC

I really liked how you did a take on Teacher and had Gwen teach Arthur how to cook (I want to see that on the show) and Arthur teaching Gwen how to fight! Good job!

railise April 20 2011, 15:07:41 UTC

I love the alternating hotness and sweetness, teasing and sincerity, between Arthur and Gwen-- that captured their dynamic (and why I adore them so much :)) very well.