Yay for 8th grade!

Jan 30, 2005 14:48


I just found this poem thingy that Emily, Leanna, and I had to write for Mrs. Donnelly's 8th grade English class.  Some of it is not that bad, take a looksie:


Your face is the star that shines in my sky.
It was as if your orange eyes were on fire as you stared at me.
I could feel your hand in mine;
I could smell the sweet cologne upon your chest;
I could hear your hear drumming against my ear;
I could taste your sweet lips on mine;
And I could see us together forever.
I'm lying in your arms,
You're holding me tight.
Keeping me away from all harms,
This moment feels so right.
Venus bonded us together,
In the romantic city of Greece.
But I'm so afraid the fire in your eyes will fade out.
Then the hill we're sitting on,
Suddenly feels so cold.
I'm so happy at his moment,
But still one vehement tear rolls down my cheek.
And Venus handed us a dove,
Just do hang on to.
"Je t'aime" you whispered in my ear,
The graceful solitude of our love, lies here with us.
Raindrops start falling on us,
But everything is still as if it were a dream.
You kissed me on my head,
And my wings lifted me off the ground.
Your love provides me something serene,
And I don't even need to think of the scene.
I see us stepping up to the chappel together.
What a horrible love this is,
That it makes us forget about everything surrounding us.
This night will never end.
Your smile is like a sweet tenderness redeeming my soul.
The starts called our names,
Beconing us to come with them as if it were destiny.
After every breath, I can hear your heart drumming my ear.

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