Re: Britt HereafterthetoneSeptember 4 2004, 23:02:03 UTC
Thanks Britt. Not only for the compliment, but the comment as well. It makes me so unhappy that people don't comment, not because "oh, it's a comment! Yay, they like me! etc.", but because I wanna know what people thought and what they think I could improve or what their first reaction was. Well, you understand. If you liked this one, you should read the rest, there's a bunch throughout my journal and if you look you'll find them. The coolest part for me about this piece is it's based off a real conversation I had with a college friend. She graduated our school last year, and then over the summer I became REALLY close with her. Anyway, we were on the phone the other night and everything that was said in that poem was said in the convo, it was just not in that order, and I had to add/subtract some words so I could make it rhyme, but I'm really proud of it, so Thank You for your compliment. Who knows, by next week I could be writing one about how you are, or make me feel, or what you mean to me. Give me a call, we have to catch up anyways. Much love and tons of *hugs*, AlEyA!
The coolest part for me about this piece is it's based off a real conversation I had with a college friend. She graduated our school last year, and then over the summer I became REALLY close with her. Anyway, we were on the phone the other night and everything that was said in that poem was said in the convo, it was just not in that order, and I had to add/subtract some words so I could make it rhyme, but I'm really proud of it, so Thank You for your compliment. Who knows, by next week I could be writing one about how you are, or make me feel, or what you mean to me. Give me a call, we have to catch up anyways.
Much love and tons of *hugs*,
AlEyA!
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