Comments | afterpower: Application

afterpower

Application

Mar 13, 2011 16:56

• player •
Name/Alias: Jen
LJ: ennie03
Contact Info:
→ e-mail: j.ennie.k03[at]hotmail.com
→ AIM: melodized
Previous Characters: flowerangela | Erika

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!app, !ooc

Comments 2

doctortree March 28 2011, 17:25:56 UTC

Almost there, Jen! We'd just like to see some expansion in the samples before we can give you the okay. We'd like to see more of Cheren's personality shining. For sample I, we'd like to see more of a reaction in general. The reaction feels a little underwhelming for his personality, so we would like to see that expanded and see what else he'd react with. We also feel a little more reaction to Cottonee is in order to see how he is.

Just provide us with that and you'll be good to go. Good luck! :)

afterpower March 29 2011, 00:44:36 UTC

I worked on the samples a little more, and I hope that they give you a better indication. If there's still anything you need me to fix up or edit again, let me know!

Thanks for taking your time to look over the app~