Fic: Breaking New Ground (Astral Planes, Part 2/4)

[afrakaday]

Title: Breaking New Ground
Author: afrakaday
Word Count: 5000
Rating: MA

A/N:  Part 2 of what I've dubbed the Astral Planes series.  Part 1 is here and Part 3 is here (yes, I have written them out of order).  Thanks to nixmom for the beta.

Comments

[marzipanilla]

Bill and Laura can consecrate my grounds any day.. -cough-

Her yelling at the plants was great :)

Oh, Kara at the hospital. You're really a part of the family when you get called in on an emergency. No backing out now Laura! Not that she was thinking it..

[afrakaday]

Bill and Laura can consecrate my grounds any day..

Bwahaha! Their guests will have no idea!

[newnumbertwo]

I like this 'verse!

[afrakaday]

Aww, thanks. Now to finally write the last part...

[newnumbertwo]

Nothing like a little competition to encourage writing.

[afrakaday]

Truefax.

[fragrantwoods]

How perfect a story for May 1st ("Outdoor frakking begins today")! Lovely, and them supporting Kara and Zak was so sweet.

[afrakaday]

OMG. I love it! "Outdoor frakking season"!

[defyingnormalcy]

LOVE this! I really love fics that give Bill and Zak a second chance, it breaks my heart that Zak died at such a young age in canon. :( *sniffle*

The bits of canon dialogue throughout are great! I especially liked Laura yelling at the plants, hehe! :P

Lawn!sex - I think this is a new kink of mine. :D :D :D

:P

[afrakaday]

Thank you! It really is enjoyable to write sweet Zak- I have to bring toolish!Lee into the mix for the next part, which is less fun. Oh well. :)

Lawn!sex kink, eh? Lol! I think Laura's been converted, too.

[nixmom]

toolish lee is toolish. fagedaboutit.

[nixmom]

And boom, she drops a big 55 points down for Team!Bill.