Prepaid Passion (Raydor/Fritz)

[afrakaday]

Title: Prepaid Passion
Author: afrakaday
Word count: 4300
Rating: MA
Summary: Explaining the origins of the “booty call burn phone.”
A/N: Takes place between Sit Next to Me at Summary Judgment and I’ll Grant Your Motion and Carry My Secrets Through the Morning Light. Thanks to marzipanilla for beta-reading.

Comments

[dlcookie]

Yay, another fic! You know, watching TC isn't complete until I've read your weekly instalment for the Ship of Wrongness. Please consider continuing. :D

[afrakaday]

Thanks for the support! :) It is most appreciated.

[dlcookie]

You are quite welcome. I've written a series with smutfics as part of the deal, sticking as closely to canon as possible, and it can be quite a challenge. You are writing this beautifully, and to tell you the truth… I like your version of events even better than the writers.

[newnumbertwo]

I love Gavin in this so much. That Ballet bit should be canon. Yay for first time phone sex!

CI 69: LOL

Awesome, just awesome!

[afrakaday]

Lol, thanks so much. The ballet bit felt so icky and funny at the same time. And I love their cracky code names. Thank you for reading and being on board the Ship of Wrongness. :D

[lambrosia]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (you taught me how to do that, and I am super thankful cause you deserve a lot of hearts)

So much about that story was way awesome.

Let's start with Gavin. You can't have enough Gavin. He's funny and happy and gay. But above all, he makes Raydor happy. That is always good.

I loved how you set the scene. Your description was fabulous and I truly felt as if I were there with Raydor and Gavin in the hallway, the restaurant and at the ballet.

“Of course,” he said, indifferent. He hit the button and stood waiting, occasional giggles still forthcoming.

just perfect writing! I love your turn of phrases like You should have seen some of the nonsense he was texting me from his work phone.

It's really awesome you went back in time and explained the burn phone. Totally loved the ending: how they both are willing to make an effort.

On a side note: You need to tell Sharon to get rid of her battered Uggs. That crap is just not acceptable.

Can't wait for the next installment! Are her children coming over yet? :D

[afrakaday]

Hearts! Gavin:Raydor::You:Me :D

Re: Uggs. Oh, how right you are. Even the most fashionable women have their moments of weakness! I think that idea came from an interview I read with MM that she able to stand the many hours of playing Laura Roslin in heels by slipping into uggs whenever she had a chance. Sorry to impute that to Sharon!

The kids! It will be a challenge, but I would like to bring them into this. We'll see! Thanks so much for this fantastic feedback.

[lambrosia]

Can't wait for the sequel!! Yeah, and good luck working the kids in there..

I love uggs! but once they are battered those puppies belong in the bin.

[fragrantwoods]

I heard this in such a MM voice: I appreciate the sentiment, really, I do
I love Sharon and Gavin so much here. And I think this is Fritz asking you to go steady killed me dead with lulz.

This was as bantering and literate as I would imagine their phone secksing would be :-) And even in the throes of passion, Sharon doesn't put up with any DNW, which is very cool. And the smut was very hot and believable, bless their "if this is wrong I don't want to be right" hearts :-)

Wonderful detail, from the hysterical ballet to the throw pillow-adjusting. You just hit all the right notes here.

I'd read a fic just about a day in the life of Gavin the sex god/wonder-lawyer :-)

[afrakaday]

Dead with lulz! That is incredibly pleasing. :)

This smut...idek. Very weird to write. Thanks for the reassurance, I really struggled with writing it.

I am so intrigued by the idea of a Gavin-centric fic...I was feeling like I was giving him short shrift last week and this week in that he hangs out with Sharon and they talk about Fritz and whatever else but we don't really find much else about him (except that maybe he's fooled around with straight married politicians?!), so that should probably be remedied.

[oracle2]

Hot phone sex...and this pairing is just as hot!!!
CI 69,loved it!
her sex aid drawer I wonder what else does she have in that drawer...
Gavin is always such a fun addition!Sex God Gavin.LOL

[afrakaday]

Glad you enjoyed the Gavin. :) He keeps Sharon on her toes. I had to come up with this fic to explain the phrase "booty call burn phone" because that just didn't seem like something Sharon would think of on her own!

Oh, the drawer...that too could spawn infinite more smutfics. Lol. Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave this nice feedback. :)