Title: A d r i f t
Pairings/Characters: Yokoo focused with leanings of y/f and background m/t and n/s
Rating: pg-13 for swearing
Summary: au - to dream of exploring all of space and the universe just to repair satellites
Note: Written for
yararanger as part of the kis-my-fic2 exchange - originally posted
here Thank you to Joce/rockthecliche for the beta.
(
A distant star rises... )
Comments 8
(The comment has been removed)
The world really does need more Yokoo centric fic he's so lovely.
Reply
I love your portrayal of him... So lonely, but so loved, and so darn capable. ♥ And Gaya-san with his faux nonchalant manner and NiSen who are just the kids we all love them for. And Mitsu! Heeeh He is always so fun to read as lazy!Captain. In any universe! haha Cannot help but love the MiyaTama too - my preferred pairing. ♥ So adorable.
But Watta! WATTA! My heart. It hurt. In all the best ways. And worst. Guh. I just wanted to cuddle him all the time. ♥♥ His solo mission... Aaah... My heart!
I love, love, love how he used all the others to alleviate his lonliness, despite knowing they were just figments of his imagination. ♥ Nika's brattiness at meal times...! MY HEART!
Love love love love this fic. ♥ More than I can say. I'm mentally drawing sparkly hearts all over this fic, just so you know. :) ♥
Reply
I adore the MiyaTama way too much in this au too, they kept trying to sneak in more you just can't keep them out of anything ♥
Thanks for reading and commenting and all the hearts.
Reply
It really does rock to have Yokoo fic and you set the tone so wonderfully with him right from the start ♥ Also, I love how you think you know what's going on until you reach that one line and then you're like 'WAIT WHAT REALLY??' 8DDD
Kitayama is great in here (mission Boobs!) and everyone is just so fantastically Kisumai and whee I LOVE IT \o/ ♥
Also, the YoFuji ;; ughasldkf I love the YoFuji in here and it's just so squee worthy and afsldkfj;lk ♥♥♥ *glitters everywhere*
Super love this, idek *_*
Reply
Eee, that one line that changes it was actually the first line written too and then the whole idea for the fic *makes a cat pose* just because I'm sure Yokoo really likes it when Taipi makes a cat pose.
I was scared I was doing Kitayama too much a disservice since all he does is naps, and announces it's hump day and renames the mission boobs. Such a captain~ ♥
Thanks for reading and commenting ( ◡Θ◡ ❀)
Reply
*coughs* I mean, it's rare to see a Yokoo-centered fic (and with a side of YokoFuji, which I always appreciate) and I totally love the space setting.
I was also completely taken aback to find out that Yokoo was alone on that mission °_° but the fact he knows so well all the others makes me go all awwww ♥
By the way, I love the way you write! How come you never published anything before?
Reply
This is amazing, really. I love how the story flows, with little descriptions here and there, the bits of humor mixed in with the more poignant parts, everything captures the mood and emotions perfectly.
And the way you write Yokoo is lovely <33
Reply
Leave a comment