[fic] A d r i f t

Apr 16, 2012 10:12

Title: A d r  i  f   t
Pairings/Characters: Yokoo focused with leanings of y/f and background m/t and n/s
Rating: pg-13 for swearing
Summary: au - to dream of exploring all of space and the universe just to repair satellites

Note: Written for yararanger as part of the kis-my-fic2 exchange - originally posted  here 
Thank you to Joce/rockthecliche for the beta.

A distant star rises... )

group: kisumai, fiction, johnny: yokoo wataru, pairing: yokoo/fujigaya

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afoolwrites April 17 2012, 21:32:24 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting, both times.

The world really does need more Yokoo centric fic he's so lovely.

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han_corrupted April 19 2012, 16:41:12 UTC
I agree with shisaigas - the world needs more Watta-centric fics. This one is amazing! ♥ Guh. My poor Watta.

I love your portrayal of him... So lonely, but so loved, and so darn capable. ♥ And Gaya-san with his faux nonchalant manner and NiSen who are just the kids we all love them for. And Mitsu! Heeeh He is always so fun to read as lazy!Captain. In any universe! haha Cannot help but love the MiyaTama too - my preferred pairing. ♥ So adorable.

But Watta! WATTA! My heart. It hurt. In all the best ways. And worst. Guh. I just wanted to cuddle him all the time. ♥♥ His solo mission... Aaah... My heart!

I love, love, love how he used all the others to alleviate his lonliness, despite knowing they were just figments of his imagination. ♥ Nika's brattiness at meal times...! MY HEART!

Love love love love this fic. ♥ More than I can say. I'm mentally drawing sparkly hearts all over this fic, just so you know. :) ♥

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afoolwrites April 19 2012, 22:03:14 UTC
Watta is oh so wonderful to write for too, he's got layers and feels so reserved at times but then he's just so lovely. Plus, how he interacts with each member differently, and what he does for them. He deserves all the love.

I adore the MiyaTama way too much in this au too, they kept trying to sneak in more you just can't keep them out of anything ♥

Thanks for reading and commenting and all the hearts.

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crazy_otaku911 April 19 2012, 19:54:53 UTC
So I totally was flailing over this since it was posting in Fic2 but I could never quite pluck up the courage to comment on it (Why, I have no idea lmao ;;) but OH MY GOD I LOVE IT SO MUCH ;o; Rosieeeeee *flings feels at*

It really does rock to have Yokoo fic and you set the tone so wonderfully with him right from the start ♥ Also, I love how you think you know what's going on until you reach that one line and then you're like 'WAIT WHAT REALLY??' 8DDD

Kitayama is great in here (mission Boobs!) and everyone is just so fantastically Kisumai and whee I LOVE IT \o/ ♥

Also, the YoFuji ;; ughasldkf I love the YoFuji in here and it's just so squee worthy and afsldkfj;lk ♥♥♥ *glitters everywhere*

Super love this, idek *_*

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afoolwrites April 19 2012, 22:08:25 UTC
*catches your feels*

Eee, that one line that changes it was actually the first line written too and then the whole idea for the fic *makes a cat pose* just because I'm sure Yokoo really likes it when Taipi makes a cat pose.

I was scared I was doing Kitayama too much a disservice since all he does is naps, and announces it's hump day and renames the mission boobs. Such a captain~ ♥

Thanks for reading and commenting ( ◡Θ◡ ❀)

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un_sanzo April 27 2012, 21:00:36 UTC
asdfghjhgfdsa♥♥♥?
*coughs* I mean, it's rare to see a Yokoo-centered fic (and with a side of YokoFuji, which I always appreciate) and I totally love the space setting.
I was also completely taken aback to find out that Yokoo was alone on that mission °_° but the fact he knows so well all the others makes me go all awwww ♥

By the way, I love the way you write! How come you never published anything before?

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orange_c_c May 1 2012, 14:10:59 UTC
Wow, I have nothing to say, but WOW.

This is amazing, really. I love how the story flows, with little descriptions here and there, the bits of humor mixed in with the more poignant parts, everything captures the mood and emotions perfectly.

And the way you write Yokoo is lovely <33

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