The Stone walls of Spinner's End- Snarry- NC-17 [oneshot]

Nov 27, 2009 22:49

Title: Stone walls of Spinner's End
Chapters: oneshot
Pairing/Characters: Snape/Harry
Wordcount: 1280
Genre: PWP
Warnings: swearing, m/m sex, public sex, misuse of petrifying spells, cutting curses and stone walls.
Rating:NC-17
Beta: the_flic (thank you so much!)
Summary: angry sex fic.

stone walls of Spinner's End )

fanfiction, harry potter

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reg_flint November 27 2009, 14:03:54 UTC
A neat llittle fic, even if they are (gorgeously, given the circumstances) OOC, or at least, Severus is. Some smut fascinates me but yaoi is always good. Well done for a first Snarry, very well done "angry sex"...the inspiration for Sectumsempera was briliant.

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:32:14 UTC
uhm... thanks!

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:50:55 UTC
"the thing is, you don't seem to distingush sex from violence "
that really got me, you know. HURT me.
of all people i didn't think you'll miss the complete immaturity of my writing, therefore there maybe mishaps in it! i've never written rough!sex before so somebody might think i'm confusing the terms. BUT ASSUMING ABOUT ME AND MY PERSONALITY IS BELOW THE BELT, PLZ KEEP THIS TO URSELF.

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reg_flint November 27 2009, 23:02:54 UTC
My apologies. That is why I edited the comment, so as not to spit venom. I did not intend to hurt you. You likely won't believe that, but it was not my intention. I worried about your reaction and edited it. You are right, it was below the belt. I will keep my venom to myself, and only post the decent stuff...if I am still allowed to comment to your journal.

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 23:07:59 UTC
uhm... well you did edit it so it's probably true... i just didn't think someone would assume about ME from this fic... i've written worse you know... and what about those who write gore, violence, death, rape, chan rape fics? i don't think they belong to hospital. it's not real, we just play.
i also wanted to put mild violence / dub- con warnings but thought against it. i was wrong it seems.
anyways , i'm not gonna be angry at you. but it still hurts you think so bad of me.

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reg_flint November 27 2009, 23:12:11 UTC
**feels like shit** sorry. I actually think you're really bright and intense, I don't think badly of you.

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 23:15:05 UTC
okay. i don't think bad of you too. let's stop at that. don't assume anymore okay? next time you better put it into question form so i won't throw tantrums!

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 23:17:10 UTC
oh and for the record: Sev didn't hurt Harry!well, yes he immobilised and undressed and fucked him withou asking 'are you sure' and shit. in his defence i can say my sev's pretty blinded with rage. he's too posessive you know... hurting harry wasn't his intention.

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