Atristry

Nov 22, 2010 22:32

Title: Artistry
Author: Afiawri
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Neal
Warnings: None
Word Count: 266
Thanks: To elrhiarhodan for the prompt: Neal wishing for glory ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, fandom: white collar, rated: g

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daria234 November 23 2010, 19:00:39 UTC
Wow, this really packed a punch. Great fic - this seems so IC and tells us about that underlying anger at himself he must have, as well as his need to be 'great'

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afiawri November 24 2010, 05:46:20 UTC
Thank you! I really struggled with this one and I'm really happy to see this nice review. <3

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elrhiarhodan December 9 2010, 02:35:40 UTC
This one actually hurt...like a pinch or a swift punch in the gut. Brava, my dear. Your talent always astounds me.

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afiawri December 13 2010, 01:38:10 UTC
Why, thank you. What a lovely review to recieve.

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elrhiarhodan December 13 2010, 01:47:58 UTC
You are most very welcome, and most completely deserved.

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ivorysilk December 9 2010, 02:42:23 UTC
This is really interesting--I know I always see Neal as some kind of wunderkind, at least work-wise, but it's sort of a new look to think that he really ... isn't, or at least, he doesn't think he is, which is more to the point.

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afiawri December 13 2010, 01:38:54 UTC
Thank you! That's exactly it.

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jrosemary December 9 2010, 04:50:01 UTC
Brilliant--I feel like I've been punched in the gut, because Neal's self doubts ring so true. (We know he's a genius in many ways, but he may not be when it comes to original art. Or maybe his fear that he isn't is just his personal demon.) Thank you!

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afiawri December 13 2010, 01:49:00 UTC
And thank you! Both for this review and the rec; it really excited me to see it. I'm so glad this resonated with you so.

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crism79 December 12 2010, 18:40:41 UTC
This is just beautiful and sad :))

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afiawri December 13 2010, 01:49:22 UTC
Aw, thanks. I'm glad to hear you think so.

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