Yours (if you will take all of me) A Co-authored Fic with Photoash

[afiawri]

Title: Yours (if you will take all of me)
Author: afiawri & Ashcat (photoash)
Rating: NC-17
Genre and/or Pairing: PWP (with a side of h/c); Neal/Peter
Warnings: Light BDSM and slightly broken scene
Word Count: 6,659
Notes: For hoosierbitch - feel better soon! Thanks to daria234 for her advice and encouragement!
Summary: Neal has wanted kinkier sex with Peter for some time; Peter

Comments

[daria234]

I left a comment at Ash's journal picking out my favorite quotes but I also wanted to tell you that I LOVE all the negotiations and the pain and how hard it is for both of them to say what's appealing about this and all the trust and the sweetness between them even in the most intense parts.

Also it was hot like WHOA :)

[afiawri]

The quotes you picked were some of my favorites, too. (And I don't blame you for not playing that guessing game ;) I wouldn't either.) Thank you so much for being so encouraging and for such an awesome review. <3

[photoash]

<3 u :) *hugs*

[bellalaine]

*gurgles*

Wow. That was hot and difficult and possessive and just...wow.

[afiawri]

<3 Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

[photoash]

Thank you <3 I'm so glad you liked it!!

[zalman23]

God I love it!! Especially the length of it, it's so long and so beautiful, so satisfying~ I wish you could post sth as long as this one EVERYDAY!
I love that Peter is being so gentle and caring, and jealous of someone who never actually existed, and Neal willing to push his boundaries with him, and with him only!

[afiawri]

I wish I could post something this long everyday too. But alas, even if photoash and I put our heads together for a cowritten post more often, I don't think it would be possible.
And thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Your reviews never fail to make me smile.

[zalman23]

Wow, now I feel the pressure to creative, ha :)

[photoash]

LOL! afiawri and I write together quite often <3 but getting it ready to share is a quite other matter!

I'm so glad you liked it <3 what a lovely comment!

and I'm showing my age by saying when I saw your nick my first thougth was how I had a Zalman fanless microprocessor heat sink back on a pc I built in 2000? 2001? XD

[rabidchild]

Oh. My. Goodness. What an awesome story. Not only hot, but with a bonus side of h/c (it's like a gift with purchase!). Exactly what I needed tonight.

I am insanely in love with how gentle and caring Peter is, even as he's giving Neal exactly what he wants (and really, really loving it). Also, Neal going a little overboard is particularly relatable, because who hasn't been there? GUH!

[afiawri]

Thanks so much <3

[photoash]

<3 LOL love your description of a gift with purchase! :D I'm so happy you liked it <3

[teleens_journal]

Well done.

Thanks for writing! :)

[afiawri]

Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[photoash]

Thank you for commenting!