Glass

Sep 28, 2010 21:14

Title: Glass
Author: Afiawri
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Peter
Warnings: explicit sex
Word Count: 665
Thanks: to photoash for the prompt (well, I lost a bet, actually.)

Hundreds of feet below, there are lights. )

pairing: neal/peter, rated: nc-17, !fanfiction, fandom: white collar

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photoash September 29 2010, 02:50:58 UTC
<3 I love this!! :D It is a lovely look at sex high above the city, the way you describe the glass heating, his dick required to be pressed against it.

Your language is so sensual in it <3

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afiawri September 29 2010, 21:34:43 UTC
Thank you. <3 The original prompt was fantastic, so I owe much of that to you.

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ladygray99 September 29 2010, 03:39:49 UTC
You really, really, really need to lose bets more often. This was hot and so painfully beautiful at the same time.

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afiawri September 29 2010, 21:36:17 UTC
I don't often lost bets, I'm afraid. Thank you very much.

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ursula4x September 29 2010, 03:41:12 UTC
This was so much a quiet hurricane. It was so moving yet a gentle picture.

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afiawri September 29 2010, 21:37:03 UTC
What a lovely analogy. Thank you so much.

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daria234 September 29 2010, 04:18:46 UTC
agree with all the above comments. This was sensual and gentle even as it was mind-blowing - really powerful combination.

Love the image of heat and cold, the pressing up against the glass, all of it. That was amazing fucking hot. whew.

Also I love how this is special, how they usually have to be so careful and put the outside world first and here it's like the snow covers the outside world just enough that it's not a concern right at the moment.

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afiawri September 29 2010, 21:43:56 UTC
Wow, thank you so much.

I didn't think of that with the snow that's an intriguing observation. :D

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zalman23 September 29 2010, 07:42:27 UTC
Wow, with all the snow, it's gonna be like christmas (or even beter) if I could be in the opposite building, watching, with a camera...

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afiawri September 29 2010, 21:46:24 UTC
I've tried taking photos of something through a snowy night. The light of the flash catches every flake. It's really pretty- but probably not what you want a photo of. ;)

But if you devised a way to watch this, I'd very much like to be invited along! :D

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