Virginity

[aetin]

Title: Virginity
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2,554
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: Sequel to Hazards. Jim wants to sex up Spock, but is concerned because, due to his memory loss, he's a little bit...inexperienced.

Notes: I tried to make this porny, I really did. It just didn't want to go that way. Oh well. Have a silly little sequel.

Comments

[coeurdesoleil]

ajdøkaj kfjaskgjakdjgkajføadjf!!!!!!
This deserves a keyboard smash, over and over again XDDDDD
ajdalfjak fjøa kdjfakdjaghjhfødjføajdsøflajdklfj !!!

Ok, seriously, I'm so excited every time you post new fic, but next to "The First Time", "Hazards" is my favourite story of yours and I really loved this little sequel! ♥

So, I'm doing a running commentary of squee while I'm rereading this:
McCoy! I think I've mentioned before that I love your McCoy, but it bears repeating, 'cos your McCoy PoV is awesome in the first part of this. In fact, the entire conversation between Jim and Bones is pretty darn awesome; I choked on my tea when Jim explained why he was there!

“I’m a doctor,” McCoy helpfully informed him, in case he didn’t know by now, “not a happy person. I don’t laugh.”
Hahahahaha...
McCoy neglected to mention that the majority of Jim’s sexual encounters happened an average of one hour after meeting his partner, and that his relationships tended to happen after several encounters of that type.
ROFL!

Jim actually started to turn red. Clearly Spock had been teaching Jim modesty and propriety.
I now I have these very vivid pictures in my head of Spock explaining the concept of modesty to a (initially) slighty confused Jim....

And then when Jim told Bones he just wanted to sleep in the same bed as someone else, my heart melted. Awww... I really love how sweet Jim is in this!

And then the second part: ajfkajgjadøkjakjgdøkgjødkag!!!
I LOVE it when Spock is initiating things and being all confident:
Jim would have said something nice in return, but Spock’s hand was venturing beneath the waistband of his sleep pants and instead he made a noise that he wasn’t quite sure how to classify. It was like a combination of moan, gasp and whimper. He thought about being embarrassed by the noise, but Spock seemed to enjoy it and stuck his tongue into Jim’s mouth in response, so it couldn’t have been that bad. He tried to stay quiet as Spock slowly rolled on top of him, bracing himself on one elbow and not breaking the kiss.
♥ ♥

Also, this: Regardless, even if you were below the standard you might set for yourself, it would simply be an opportunity for me to continue having sexual relations with you at least until you regain your prior skill level and then beyond in the hopes of developing new skills.

Ok, I'll stop quoting your own fic back at you now. :D
I loved every word of this and you must, MUST write more from this 'verse (with or without sex in it) because this 'verse is AWESOME!!!

[coeurdesoleil]

Oops, I see my comment got a little bit longer than I planned...