Thank you so much for your wonderful review! They really made my day!
The use of pronouns were done to keep the identity of each character hidden until the end. As there are really only two "main" characters in this, it makes it easier to figure out who is who :)
I purposely didn't use quotations for Itachi because I wanted to convey his disorientation from everything around him. The stream-of-consciousness that I used is also there for reinforcing his detachment.
But! Those two were very good points! Thank you for pointing them out! :)
Comments 5
xD i reviewed on ff.net, though.
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
Reply
The use of pronouns were done to keep the identity of each character hidden until the end. As there are really only two "main" characters in this, it makes it easier to figure out who is who :)
I purposely didn't use quotations for Itachi because I wanted to convey his disorientation from everything around him. The stream-of-consciousness that I used is also there for reinforcing his detachment.
But! Those two were very good points! Thank you for pointing them out! :)
Reply
Leave a comment