Metanoia: Still waters run cool

[aescu]

Title: Metanoia: A lesson in humanity
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Castiel, Dean
Spoilers: none
Warnings: freezing cold water
Word Count: ~800
Summary: Metanoia means 'change of mind and heart' - and Castiel *is* changing. Becoming more human with all the ups and downs of a human life. Fortunately he is not alone: Dean and Sam are there to help and guide

Comments

[caffienekitty]

Interesting imagery with the wings. Although swimming like that in cold water, maybe angels are part penguin? ;-)

Incidentally, in your summary, " a human live" should be " a human life"

[aescu]

Incidentally, in your summary, " a human live" should be " a human life"
Oh crap... Now I have to correct that in countless places. Damn me for not being able to spell correctly.
Thanks for pointing out (it's funny you've been the first person to notice)

[caffienekitty]

I think most people just skim over things like that without seeing them (like me, obviously or I'd have noticed a while back XD) and fix them mentally.

Since you had mentioned before you were still developing your english skills here's the details: The word "live" is either the verb "To live" (liv) or the adjective (or rarely adverb) "live" (lahyv) as in 'live bait', 'live music' or 'This circuit is live.' "Life" (lahyf) is the noun. :-)

[aescu]

Theoretically I know the difference but being dyslexic doesn't particularly help with stuff like that so I am always glad when someone points out those mistakes :)

And I feel kinda dumb when I am still doing the same errors I did 10 years ago *blushes*

[caffienekitty]

No worries! I know non-dyslexic native English speakers who make the same mistake. :-D