.fic: Biscayne - D/M 1.1

[aesc]

Title: Biscayne
By: HF
Email: aesc36 @gmail.com
Pairing: Danny/Martin
Rating/Warnings: PG/PG13ish. No warnings as such.
Disclaimer: Without a Trace belongs to Jerry Bruckheimer, CBS, and very likely many other people

Comments

[maygra]

I love you. I do. And I love this story with all it's hope and uncertainty, and the stumbling and bumbling they still do.

This is perfect and exactly what I was hoping for. You did an amzing job tying up this side of it. Thank you.

(off to read the entire wonderous series again.)

[aesc]

I am quite beyond thrilled that you enjoyed this, and thank you again for suggesting the continuation to me.

with all it's hope and uncertainty, and the stumbling and bumbling they still do.

Oh, that's exactly what I was going for--hope and uncertainty, as you say. Ah, I just love that.

[spoiledjap]

In my perfect world, you kept this universe alive forever. This was lovely and a perfect thing to read while taking a break from a final.

[aesc]

Thank you! This universe was supposed to stop developing a long, long time ago, with the fifth chapter of ALTC. Needless to say, it's now gone somewhat beyond that... And while I'm not sure how long I can keep it going in terms of keeping the story fresh, I do have a couple things in the back of my mind :)

And eek... finals. Good luck!

[aesc]

You touch on his inner vulnerability, everything that he keeps hidden behind his smirked mask, everything that he doubts and everything that ties back into the childhood he had and you nail it right on the head. I am so blown away by that.

Oh, wow. That's... that's possibly one of the nicest things anyone's ever said to me. I always like knowing when I get a character right, but knowing that I've managed something deeper... Well, I am quite wordless. Thank you so much!

and while I didn't think anything else could expand it further, not without destroying it, anyway

That's the one thing that's keeping me back from fully committing to writing any more in this universe... trying to keep the storyline fresh, changing and developing, but still have Martin and Danny be recognizable as Martin and Danny from ALTC. Finishing "Every Distance" was pretty rough, because I get depressed whenever I finish a long fic... maybe I don't want to feel that way yet. Eeg.

[burningchaos]

I have so much love for this series. I am always so clueless when it comes to feedback. I think the thing I love the most is this entire series is just so effortless to read. It is serious and light and the flow draws you in and if you didn't already love these boys before readign this you would afterwards.

Sidenote, the penguin icon so rocks. I loved Madagascar and they so made the movie.

[aesc]

*blush* Thank you so much!

if you didn't already love these boys before readign this you would afterwards.

How anyone could not love Danny and Martin is beyond me, but I do hope if such a person exists, I can help convert them :D

I loved Madagascar and they so made the movie

Weirdly, I haven't seen it yet... I've only seen the trailers, but even in those, the penguins ruled. And I love penguins in general :D

[lillyjk]

gah - I just realized I'm about 2 parts behind in this series. I don't think I read Sons & Lovers *smites self* about to go to bed but saving to my fics to read folder.

[aesc]

*pets* Don't worry about it... you've been busy and sick and sick of being busy. We all have been there.