Fix?
I mentioned in my last post that I caught a few more mistakes in A Demon's Demand, despite my usual rigorous editing. It was actually 11 mistakes on 274 pages, to be exact! XD Anyways~ Finally got around to fixing it! I won't bother correcting it on FF.net, but it's corrected in my own file.
That said, I recently received this one review for The Hunt for BK-201 regarding confusion on one of the chapters. It mentioned choppy dialogue and putting it in brackets for the first half of the chapter. I went to check out what s/he meant and it's the chapter (#21) where Misaki was in the hospital and the rest of the team (minus July) was discussing the situation after they visited her.
(Extra side note - I really love that story! It makes me want to re-read it again... Lol~ Its prequel wasn't so hot which isn't surprising since it was my first fanfic for the series, but this one... Yup, still love it a lot.)
When I checked the chapter, I noticed that all the page breaks are gone... So that's kind of a nuisance or "obnoxious" as Khalia would say! It will flow so much better with the proper breaks, but the question is... Do I REALLY want to go back and check all my stories for that? =__=;;
It's a lot of work, so I'm kind of torn. I want my stories to be presented the way they should be, but it's such a hassle! I would have to re-upload a lot of stuff... BAH. What do you guys think? Should I?
On another note~ I WAS going to reply to the DTB discussion post earlier, except my computer was being annoying slow. And now that it's functioning properly again, it's become rather late. My thoughts are not organized, so I'll come back to it later!
... Now if I could just settle down and get some actual work done. Until then, it's bedtime!
That said, I recently received this one review for The Hunt for BK-201 regarding confusion on one of the chapters. It mentioned choppy dialogue and putting it in brackets for the first half of the chapter. I went to check out what s/he meant and it's the chapter (#21) where Misaki was in the hospital and the rest of the team (minus July) was discussing the situation after they visited her.
(Extra side note - I really love that story! It makes me want to re-read it again... Lol~ Its prequel wasn't so hot which isn't surprising since it was my first fanfic for the series, but this one... Yup, still love it a lot.)
When I checked the chapter, I noticed that all the page breaks are gone... So that's kind of a nuisance or "obnoxious" as Khalia would say! It will flow so much better with the proper breaks, but the question is... Do I REALLY want to go back and check all my stories for that? =__=;;
It's a lot of work, so I'm kind of torn. I want my stories to be presented the way they should be, but it's such a hassle! I would have to re-upload a lot of stuff... BAH. What do you guys think? Should I?
On another note~ I WAS going to reply to the DTB discussion post earlier, except my computer was being annoying slow. And now that it's functioning properly again, it's become rather late. My thoughts are not organized, so I'll come back to it later!
... Now if I could just settle down and get some actual work done. Until then, it's bedtime!