Wheeee! You know I really enjoyed this AU with all the sense of place and time (and footnotes! So cool!) *g* The confrontation at the Observatory was Awesome! I loved the fact that Azazel sounded just like his modern seductive evil self, and the confrontation with him in Dean's body was brilliant (not to mention hot)!
I really liked the later sections of Dean's POV, and the change in language you used for him. The startling hush before Tetrazzini sings, and Sam finds Dean, then the passion of the following scene were very effective (and great use of the historical event). The use of the final telegram was a pretty cool conceit, too *g*
Finally, the story looks great, with all your hard work coding and formatting. I hope you got some sleep *g*
N'aww...your comments are all so sweet, darlin'!! I LOVE that you enjoyed the footnotes and research, because honestly? I'd rather ten people get my motivations for the story than fifty people just read it for the smexing.
Eeee I'm SO happy you indulged me and took a look at all the research stuff! Seriously, I think I put more heart and soul into that than the actual story itself, so it means a lot that some readers were interested. Thank you!!
This was amazing, wonderful, brilliant! I cannot gush enough. From the moment I landed at the table of contents in your journal, read the synopsis and saw the art, I was hooked. I absolutely adore historical fiction, but it takes a special topic to really draw me in, and you've more than successfully done that. It is clear you researched even the minutest of details, from the language of the time (which you made seem effortless) to the locations and the characterizations. And of course, even though this is AU, I think you pegged the Winchesters for all they are. Honestly, the way you wrote Dean stood out to me. I loved how informal he was from the beginning. The brothers' altercation in the alcove by the phone was perfect... The way Dean reacted by saying something like "Calm down" really got me, because Sam really is one to fly off the proverbial handle all too often
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Wow, gosh. I don't even know what to say to such amazing feedback. I'm so happy you looked at the footnotes *__* The whole time I was coding them, I was like "boo, what if I'm the only one who will ever click on these links?" so THANK YOU for that.
I read it on my phone so it was in my tight grip at all times Hahaha, this made me chuckle. Don't strain yourself, dear!
I hope that you are extremely proud of this I am, I really am *_* I'm so glad it all came together at the end, because there were totally enough obstacles to keep me from finishing it.
The footnotes were fascinating to me YOU READ THE FOOTNOTES! \o/
This story is so unusual for me in that usually I like meaty, discussion-y questions about the content, but this time I'm just like. I want everyone else to fall in love with San Francisco and that time period like I did, and the story? Well, if people liked it, that's an added bonus XD So yeah, it makes me so, so happy to hear people appreciated the footnotes. Not to mention they were a bitch to code o_o
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You know I really enjoyed this AU with all the sense of place and time (and footnotes! So cool!) *g*
The confrontation at the Observatory was Awesome! I loved the fact that Azazel sounded just like his modern seductive evil self, and the confrontation with him in Dean's body was brilliant (not to mention hot)!
I really liked the later sections of Dean's POV, and the change in language you used for him. The startling hush before Tetrazzini sings, and Sam finds Dean, then the passion of the following scene were very effective (and great use of the historical event). The use of the final telegram was a pretty cool conceit, too *g*
Finally, the story looks great, with all your hard work coding and formatting. I hope you got some sleep *g*
Eta for spelling *g*
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This story was sooo good! I loved it so much, the originality of it, how you twisted elements of cannon to fit the story, I was sad to see it end :(
Awesome!!!!!!!
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I read it on my phone so it was in my tight grip at all times
Hahaha, this made me chuckle. Don't strain yourself, dear!
I hope that you are extremely proud of this
I am, I really am *_* I'm so glad it all came together at the end, because there were totally enough obstacles to keep me from finishing it.
Thanks again for your comments! *hugs them*
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YOU READ THE FOOTNOTES! \o/
This story is so unusual for me in that usually I like meaty, discussion-y questions about the content, but this time I'm just like. I want everyone else to fall in love with San Francisco and that time period like I did, and the story? Well, if people liked it, that's an added bonus XD So yeah, it makes me so, so happy to hear people appreciated the footnotes. Not to mention they were a bitch to code o_o
xoxothanks darling~
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