Comments | aeron_lanart: fic: Eight Hours 8/? [NC-17] Highlander/Torchwood crossover

aeron_lanart

fic: Eight Hours 8/? [NC-17] Highlander/Torchwood crossover

Dec 09, 2008 20:21

Author: A Lanart
Title: Eight Hours
Fandom: Torchwood/Highlander
Characters: Jack/Ianto/Methos
Rating: This part NC-17 for m/m/m smut
Warnings/Spoilers: None/TW S1, KKBB and DW S3.
Disclaimer: Torchwood belongs to Aunty Beeb. Methos belongs to Panzer/Davis productions
Summary: Temporal Displacement? Makes your tongue tingle...

A/N: There is smut ( Read more... )

methos/jack/ianto, highlander, fic, adult, slash, crossover, torchwood, mystery_verse

Comments 20

vipersweb December 9 2008, 20:37:09 UTC

This is quite lovely. I like the imagery in this and that Jack is able to find what he's looking for in their arms and with them.

aeron_lanart December 9 2008, 20:56:43 UTC

Thank you! The only thing I knew I wanted from this scene was Jack in the middle! The rest of it was just not happening and reading the good smut/bad smut thread probably didn't help as I realised just how many of the good old disliked cliche words I've used in this fic already.

Then Emma made her comment about cerebral smut and I realised that was the direction this needed. I'm glad it worked for you.

doctor_addicted December 9 2008, 20:41:07 UTC

This was intense. I can totally understand why it might have been harder to write than other smutty bits because it was just so much more. Sexual healing done properly ;)

aeron_lanart December 9 2008, 21:00:29 UTC

Thanks! Intense was what I was aiming for, as well as a bit of Sexual Healing so I'm glad you got that.

merucha December 9 2008, 21:02:08 UTC

Oy gevalt! You have such a gift for this... it's just absolutely ridiculous how good you are!

aeron_lanart December 9 2008, 21:06:51 UTC

I am so glad you like it!

And a big thank-you to you for pushing me in the right direction for this. If it wasn't for your cerebral comment yesterday it wouldn't have morphed into this! I think I kept all of 3 sentences from my original draft - I am my own beta after all.

lferion December 9 2008, 21:13:49 UTC

Very rich and evocative -- cerebral in the 'inside the head & heart both' way. Well done.

aeron_lanart December 9 2008, 21:45:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

donutsweeper December 9 2008, 23:51:17 UTC

ah yes, Jack's home now. *sighs*

aeron_lanart December 10 2008, 12:33:26 UTC

*squishes*

Not long to go with this now I think; have passed the 10,000 word point which is surprising seeing as this started as a comment fic! Mind you, it's me, so in one way it ain't surprising at all...