"The Book of Flights" - Battlestar Galactica

May 22, 2006 00:55

Written for thenewhope at getyourtoaster. Follows the other stories of The Word.

Title: The Book of Flights
Author: Nia
Rating: PG-13
Show: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Starbuck/Cain
Spoilers: Through episode 2.12, "Resurrection Ship Part II," aired 1-13-2006.
Summary: "The first thing you did on Pegasus was try to go home."

The Book of Flights )

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projectcyborg May 27 2006, 08:07:03 UTC
it's possible I'm not entirely objective. because my favorite thing about this story is how it (dare I say "pays homage"?!?) interlocks so closely with my first fic. yaaaaaaay!

my other favorite thing is Cain. well, her and Starbuck, who is a little lost baby butch. but your Cain *scares* me, because she's so frakkin nice! so opposite to my Cain (supertop!), but then it forces you to consider what it takes for a basically good person to do horrific things -- which is chilling.

she was wondering if maybe you would wait, be patient just a little longer, if maybe you would let her sleep a while

OH EM GEEEEEEE. amazing.

it is going to be such a mindfrak for me to write the Cain round, now. she's totally still raping Gina!

now I'm going to quote you back a bunch more lines. so many zingers!

"We're all friendlies," you said, because you believed it.

oh, SNAP. that burns.

He would have just told you to kill her. Laura wrote you a frakking lyric.

*DIES* it's so brilliant and tidy! I put the poetry back in at the end, in honor of this.

You were desperate. You couldn't tell her there was no tomorrow.

nnnghhghghhh, it manages to be so hot, in the most wrong of ways!

You touched her forehead, the place where you decided you would shoot her. "Anything for you," you said. "Sir."

aaaaaaah SO GOOD. this whole section kills, really.

no better than you, no better, even, than a Cylon

hee! nice little cylon god touch, there.

and also, you make very elegant use of repetition.

in sum, you are a shining light of awesome! no seriously, it's so fantastically intricate and economical -- which may sound paradoxical, but it's the way all the puzzle-pieces fit together perfectly. and the idea that Kara finds her dead, because they had a date to finally get sexed up, just slays me! we can totally work that more later.

(now I'm wondering where the part is where Kara gets so ticked off that she stops speaking to Laura? presumably it's after Laura tells her NO about the mission to Caprica, and then proceeds to NOT DIE all contrary-like? the asking for what she wants is the last hope/straw, kinda, after everything Laura has put her through [wow, what a DICK -- I don't know if she was actually apologetic enough in my story]. maybe the Roslin/Kat fic has a Starbuck/Kat part too [not necessarily sexual]?)

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aeonian June 5 2006, 16:23:05 UTC
it is going to be such a mindfrak for me to write the Cain round, now. she's totally still raping Gina!

And then having long heart-to-hearts! I don't even remember what I'm writing for the Cain round, I'm looking forward to yours so much.

he idea that Kara finds her dead, because they had a date to finally get sexed up, just slays me!

I know. Poor Cain. Poor Kara. I would cry so hard. I miss her. :( She's not a bad person!

So we're voting for Cain in the next round, right? Mmm...Cain.

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projectcyborg June 7 2006, 04:45:39 UTC
actually, I voted for D'anna, since now I'm all inspired about her. but I'm also inspired about Cain/Gina! I predict we're going to get Boomer. I have no idea what you're writing for the Cain round either (you said you wanted more Cain/Roslin), but I'm sure that, in my infinite wisdom, I can figure it out.

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aeonian June 7 2006, 18:39:32 UTC
Didn't we discuss mine at the diner? I'll have to consult my notes. There was something about future POV and Cain's funeral.

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