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Every Dark Has An Afterglow

Jan 22, 2012 12:21

Fandom: 24, for century_fox
Title: Every Dark Has An Afterglow
Word count: 1200
Characters: Jack/Renee
Warnings: AU, spoilers for the series.
Author's notes: Under the cut

( He always finds her in any room. )

fanfic, stocking fic, jack/renee

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Re: And now a comment for real. adrenalin211 January 23 2012, 15:42:48 UTC

Holy long comment, bb! Thank you so much for taking the time to like... say all these things that you liked. You definitely didn't have to do that, especially AFTER the beta and the on-the-side encouragement.

In any case, I'm always stoked when I can fulfill a prompt of yours. And this totally started off as your prompt, so. It always brings such a smile to my face when you enjoy it. AND when you think my characterizations are good, etc. Hee.

I'm such a sucker for the head in his lap thing. And I know that sounds WRONG, but I do mean just laying there... And Jack petting her hair, because it's just CANON that he loves to do that, you know? He's so lovey and touchy and face-holdy and I can't even get over it.

I'm glad you liked that Kim and Renee shared a moment in this. I think it's so HARD, because while I agree with you that Kim would totally support Jack's relationship with Renee, I also think there will never be a time when it's not just a little bit weird. And I mean. Those times probably more obvious on holidays and stuff when Kim's really missing Teri and Renee would just... know that. So. I mean. Their relationship intrigues me. I think they'd be really great pals, and likely, when Renee got super comfortable, she'd probably just blurt the issue and confront it head on. Not to fix it, but because they can't and never will be able to.

JACK AND RENEE SHOULD SNUGGLE ON COUCHES ALL THE TIME. I'm glad it's clear to you that she's still a mess but she holds it together well and...all that. Eep. ILU and your thoughtful comments. You always know exactly what I'm thinking when I write stuff.

ALSO, I need to get a degree so I can move out of this house and stop constantly whining to you about that. DUH. Plus. I really think there might be no environment more suited to me than school. BUT I DO PLAN TO KEEP WRITING FOR YOU.

Re: And now a comment for real. leigh57 January 23 2012, 16:00:35 UTC

and likely, when Renee got super comfortable, she'd probably just blurt the issue and confront it head on. Not to fix it, but because they can't and never will be able to.

THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS.

Is exactly what would happen. Because Kim would be pleasant and stuff and just be all ugh sometimes this is uncomfortable, but Renee would be all, "Fuck this noise," and hit it right upside the head.

And yes, head in lap FTW. All the face touching EVER. Like this:

Re: And now a comment for real. adrenalin211 January 23 2012, 16:02:45 UTC

Oh god. Fuck you a lot! That is so entirely distracting.

HIS FACE. HER EYES! HIS THUMB.

Re: And now a comment for real. leigh57 January 23 2012, 16:05:23 UTC

Fuck me very much? Bwhee hee.

I love these 8x07 .gifs for more reasons than there are numbers, but I feel pretty safe in saying that the #1 reason is that her eyes are finally back. GOD IT WAS STRESSFUL WHEN THEY WERE NOT.

Re: And now a comment for real. adrenalin211 January 23 2012, 16:08:36 UTC

I seriously can't stop watching it. Her eyes ARE back.

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