A Storm's Gonna Come - Chapter 18

[adoringaudience]

Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Summary: Five years post-513. This story is anti-angst medication. Nothing bad ever happens here (that’s not completely true, but it’s definitely kept to a minimum).
A/N: This chapter kept fighting me every step of the way. So, if it sucks - it’s because I finally surrendered. But either way, here it is, finally. All

Comments

[sexy_pumpkin]

This was the 1st thing I saw posted on LJ when I logged in, & IMG I'm so happy it was.

Truly I have no words,,but it was so beautiful to read, my head is spinning & I'm sitting here tingling all over lol.

I loved that they both got to experience the "raw" feeling, wow so hot, but they're love for each other, was even more amazing.

Well Im off to bed, with LOTS of pleasant dreams I'm sure:) thanks so much for this, I didn;t think that this was going to be "the" chapter lol
Im really glad that it was.

See ya soon,,Jx

[adoringaudience]

Happy you liked! Really, I went through so many rewrites, until I finally gave up. Of all the chapter I posted so far, this one I'm most nervous about. Thank you for making me a little calmer. Hope you have wonderful dreams.
xo

[bknjt]

OMG...I had to take my head out of the freezer to write this...lol... I didn't think it was possible..but.. after what just happened... the two of them have become more closer than ever...AMAZING...since Justin is still driving a rental...why don't they buy a Cuylen car...being sooo expensive.. maybe they're also safer?? Just a thought... Thanks..

[adoringaudience]

Lady, stop spoiling my plotlines!! ;) You're a way too observant reader. LOL
That was me saying I love your comments and thank you.

[bknjt]

I can't help it if great minds think alike!!! I promise to be less "observant" in the future... LOL.... Thanks....

[adoringaudience]

I promise to be less "observant" in the future
Nooo, please. I love that you pick up on all the details and figure out where this is headed. It's reaffirming to know that the little hints actually 'work' and that it makes you think about it and connect the dots.

[jizabel91]

Wow!!! It was beautiful!!!Love it soooooo much! Amazing work!!!! The best ever raw sex scene between B/J I have ever read!! You just gave me one more reason to think of this story as my number one, all time favorite B/J fic story.

[adoringaudience]

*blushing*
Wow. Don't know what to say to that. Except, wow. You made me a very happy girl today. That's some praise! Thank you so much.
*MWAH*

[toto_too514]

One of the best "Brian and Justin do it raw" scenes I've read in a long time! You've really captured the chemistry that made Brian and Justin the most irresistible couple TV has ever produced.

Love the fact that the seemingly innocent statement that he and Brian were spending the night IN, still makes Justin's Mom shy! (I suppose it's a bit of self-preservation on her part though, no?! ;D)

Love Brian's musing regarding, "me" and "us." It was quite beautiful, but still very Brian.

[adoringaudience]

About Jennifer: I don't think parents will ever feel completely comfortable with seeing their children as adult, sexually active grown-ups. And it has nothing to do with one's sexual orientation. Some people will always think of their children as kids. Of course, there are exceptions. But I don't think Jennifer is one of them.

Thank you for the comment. I'm really glad that you liked this chapter.

[rainbow1907]

*fans herself* Phew, I'm somewhat out of breath here... this was absolutely amazing, sensational lovemaking ♥ You managed to take the Brian and Justin doing it the first time raw to a completely new level. Thanks so much for that! Hugs, Rena ♥

[adoringaudience]

Now I have to fan myself 'cause I'm blushing with all the praise again. Thank you, dear. You're always so kind with your comments. Glad the raw scene worked for you. You have no idea how many nerves it cost me to write it.

[rainbow1907]

Well maybe I can relate a little bit, in the shortfic sequel that I recently wrote I also wanted to put in a sex scene and - dear goodness ;) - that was the most difficult thing I ever wrote, I worried about every single word in this scene, it was quite nerve racking to get this the way I wanted it to be :)

[adoringaudience]

Need link to your story immediately.

I like writing sex scenes and once I get my mind into it, it usually flows easily. But them doing it raw is another thing entirely. 'Cause people want to read that. I know I do, as a reader. And it's so much pressure.