Oh... I liked this a lot ♥. You did good, it felt very right. I don't normally read RPS but every once in a while I give it a try. And your fic here was definitely worth it. Thanks for sharing! Hugs, Rena :)
RPS is a difficult thing reading-wise. In the beginning, I always felt guilty(?) reading it. And it took me ages before I read one. Can you imagine what writing it feels like? I completely understand if people don't like it.
You are right, reading RPS also makes me feel somehow guilty, like I'm watching something that I shouldn't, like I'm you know a voyeur. But it's also a guilty pleasure because RPS can be so good that it's irresistible. It must be even more difficult to write it, I can't even imagine as I'm only making first baby steps at writing some fanfiction myself and this is difficult enough. I also wanted to thank you for recommending flashfly's wonderful drabble, it really touched me deeply inside. ♥ Rena
Yes, I waited patiently... Honestly I was so happy when I read your second line today in the morning - thanks to you, I made a big happy dance in my bed
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1. Oh yes, the Em/Brian/Justin scene is so sweet. Possessive!Brian so cute. 2. The smoking in the diner - I thought the smoking ban was older but I didn't check and since you've been there more often than me, you'll probably right. 3. Sorry to have made you cry by reccing the drabble. But it's so amazingly, stunningly perfect - everyone should read it at least once.
here I am again...pet0511October 19 2010, 15:02:29 UTC
And now one of my most unbeloved scenes in the whole show: this Hotlanta. And you know and I know that we both never ever talked about this Hotlanta. So I didn´t know about your opinion and vica versa. So when I read your RPS... but one thing first. This Hotlanta. I disliked him from the very first moment he appeared. Such things happen. And when I realised what would be going on in this scene, with every further moment my anger grew and I really thought about playing over this scene, just because of this man, brr. And then his kissing scene with Brian started. Believe me: I didn´t read your rps before, I followed your whole text just from up to down, so when I say that IMO,from the first sight of this scene, I think that Brian never has kissed anyone besides Justin like this Hotlanta (please notice the THIS Hotlanta - good?). So. Never. And I also read some about the extras in the show etc at the begínning of my QAF obsession and every time I have to see this scene (it´s like visiting an accident, you know...) I am really not happy
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Re: here I am again...adoringaudienceOctober 20 2010, 13:00:56 UTC
I'm relieved. When watching 108, I always though that Gale/Brian is way more enthusiastic with Hotlanta than with any other of the extras before or after him. It bugged me, too. Hence the RPS. And I'm so glad to know I'm not over-interpreting things. Or if I am, that I'm not the only one.
Still not sure if I'm going to continue with it. It feels... I don't know how it feels. Honestly, and I'm not fishing for compliments or anything, I really, truly think it's not good enough to be continued. (Though I know, by continuing it, I could make it better.) We'll see, okay? Right now, I'm not promising anything.
Thank you for the very informative comment(s). I really enjoyed reading your take on this ep.
I do agree with you, gals, except for one moment. When Brian reacts with "Fuck!" after Creig's ultimatum I think it's not because of his love for Justin. Oh, it is, but it's painful for him not because the boy will leave him, but because Brian understands how young Justin is and what it means for a boy to be rejected by his family. Concidering he himself never had one (real family, I mean). I'm not sure I made it clear enough. The question is disputable, of course, but that's my POV. And, sweetheart, you are doing a huge job with the project. And it's aaaaamazing!
I loved your RPS & I don't read many of them, will there be a sequel to it???
What can you say about this epi,,like you I adore Justin here, & watching Craig kick & beat Brian, made me physically ill,,I hate it,,so violent & so full of hatred.
The Hot Atlanta scene was very difficult to watch, but after Jennifer paid Brian a little visit, this was his way of telling both of them "I'll fuck whom ever I wish & when I wish" Justin leaving was very painful.
But then Brian goes & does that special something that we all forgive him for, & of course he went home to him. I really love that scene of them eating dinner together. Justin waits for his turn to eat, to speak, to fucking breathe, & it pays off. That smile from Brian says it all. You're forgiven & ILY, well not then he said it, but shit he was very close:)
Great pics & great quotes, now I'm going to have to sit & watch them all again, I will never ever tire of this show,,off to fold my washing,,it never ends here at my place, see ya over the weekend,,jx
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It must be even more difficult to write it, I can't even imagine as I'm only making first baby steps at writing some fanfiction myself and this is difficult enough.
I also wanted to thank you for recommending flashfly's wonderful drabble, it really touched me deeply inside. ♥ Rena
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2. The smoking in the diner - I thought the smoking ban was older but I didn't check and since you've been there more often than me, you'll probably right.
3. Sorry to have made you cry by reccing the drabble. But it's so amazingly, stunningly perfect - everyone should read it at least once.
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Still not sure if I'm going to continue with it. It feels... I don't know how it feels. Honestly, and I'm not fishing for compliments or anything, I really, truly think it's not good enough to be continued. (Though I know, by continuing it, I could make it better.) We'll see, okay? Right now, I'm not promising anything.
Thank you for the very informative comment(s). I really enjoyed reading your take on this ep.
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I'm not sure I made it clear enough. The question is disputable, of course, but that's my POV.
And, sweetheart, you are doing a huge job with the project. And it's aaaaamazing!
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What can you say about this epi,,like you I adore Justin here, & watching Craig kick & beat Brian, made me physically ill,,I hate it,,so violent & so full of hatred.
The Hot Atlanta scene was very difficult to watch, but after Jennifer paid Brian a little visit, this was his way of telling both of them "I'll fuck whom ever I wish & when I wish" Justin leaving was very painful.
But then Brian goes & does that special something that we all forgive him for, & of course he went home to him. I really love that scene of them eating dinner together. Justin waits for his turn to eat, to speak, to fucking breathe, & it pays off. That smile from Brian says it all. You're forgiven & ILY, well not then he said it, but shit he was very close:)
Great pics & great quotes, now I'm going to have to sit & watch them all again, I will never ever tire of this show,,off to fold my washing,,it never ends here at my place, see ya over the weekend,,jx
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