Theo's story
Well i am working on a story right now and was wondering what people thought about it. Although i like it and i have been told by many people that it was good I just want some honest opinions from people i don't know. I am only going to gie the proplouge so don't cavetch to me about where the rest of the story is. I am planning on getting it published after the first book of the first series is done. the first series is called the war of the crests. The second series is called The heirs of the crests. This is the first book of the second series so it won't be published anytime soon. so hope you enjoy reading it.
The Prologue
Strangely enough after the several years since I watched my friend be brutally murdered by his father, I have found peace. That death was maybe twelve years ago when I was eight or was I nine, I do not remember. Now I have a job and a good hobby and make thousands of dollars a day. However I am … I am still haunted by memories of what had happened so long ago. And yes I am still finding a way to make that human show his self in our world, that is if he has not already left us here to seek the shelters of another race. I am Theo… Theo Utgard and I am not going to quit trying to find the man who killed my best friend. When I find him I am going to show him what might have happened to this world before his son was beheaded by him. For it was his son’s destiny to keep the worlds out of the war known as The War of the Crests that is unless we read the prophecies wrong. Whoever it was, that war still came and I was forced to hide like a coward with my family in a cave until it was over. However short it was supposed to be it did not end until years after it was supposed to. While we were hiding my family was killed by a man who was not human or anything that walks upon Earth also known as Aerth to everyone else other than all of us who live on this planet. But for no reason he told me to watch my steps in the years to come because I had an important destiny to fulfill that was not seen in the prophecies we know of but one as old as time itself. So here is where my story begins.
The Prologue
Strangely enough after the several years since I watched my friend be brutally murdered by his father, I have found peace. That death was maybe twelve years ago when I was eight or was I nine, I do not remember. Now I have a job and a good hobby and make thousands of dollars a day. However I am … I am still haunted by memories of what had happened so long ago. And yes I am still finding a way to make that human show his self in our world, that is if he has not already left us here to seek the shelters of another race. I am Theo… Theo Utgard and I am not going to quit trying to find the man who killed my best friend. When I find him I am going to show him what might have happened to this world before his son was beheaded by him. For it was his son’s destiny to keep the worlds out of the war known as The War of the Crests that is unless we read the prophecies wrong. Whoever it was, that war still came and I was forced to hide like a coward with my family in a cave until it was over. However short it was supposed to be it did not end until years after it was supposed to. While we were hiding my family was killed by a man who was not human or anything that walks upon Earth also known as Aerth to everyone else other than all of us who live on this planet. But for no reason he told me to watch my steps in the years to come because I had an important destiny to fulfill that was not seen in the prophecies we know of but one as old as time itself. So here is where my story begins.