Comments | adellyna: fic: Patricksitting (Call It A Love Song) 1/3

adellyna

fic: Patricksitting (Call It A Love Song) 1/3

Dec 26, 2007 12:45

Title Patricksitting (Call It A Love Song)
Pairing Pete/Patrick
Rating NC-17 in the hizzzzzzy
Word Count 22,385 (seriously)
Warnings If you think sixteen-year-olds shouldn't have sex, you probably shouldn't read this. If you think sixteen-year-olds should have sex, but only with other persons legally considered minors, then this is probably not ( Read more... )

fic, pete/patrick

Comments 26

little_whittles December 26 2007, 19:46:56 UTC

srsly, how did I manage to read part 3 first? Ignore me needing a link, I'll be over here being a dumbass. ;)

little_whittles December 26 2007, 22:06:39 UTC

Oh wow. And I loved all of this, for Pete being so concerned but so wanting, and I'm off to part 2 now.

adellyna December 28 2007, 07:36:10 UTC

Aahahaha. IS IT CLEAR THAT I ADORE THEM? I THINK IT SHOULD BE.

shutyourface December 27 2007, 16:59:52 UTC

Fuck, why didn't my parents ever get me a sitter like that? All I had were my crummy sisters. That it to say, this is fantastic and I'm loving the hell out of it.

adellyna December 28 2007, 07:36:34 UTC

Man, riiiiight? Dammit. I WANT A PWENTZ FOR MY BIRTHDAY PLZ.

daydreambeleevr December 27 2007, 19:12:50 UTC

"I've never done this before."

"Jail," Pete moans. "I'm going to jail."

I suppose it's not very nice of me to snicker at that, right? :giggle:

It's a good five minutes before Pete lifts his head again, presses a kiss to the curve of Patrick's neck, and says, "Seriously. Jail."

Patrick pats Pete on the back with as much sympathy as he can muster up. Loving, friendly, Mother Teresa-like sympathy. "I'm sure you'll be very popular."

omg, funny!!!

Kerry

adellyna December 28 2007, 07:37:51 UTC

<333333333 Eeee yay!!

sunshinepill December 31 2007, 14:33:15 UTC

oh man. there are so many parts here that have turned me into mush or made me giggle until i had people staring at me more than usual.

like, ok, the demon kitty wallpaper? genius. (i've had a simmilar experience, only they were flamigos. i still have nightmares about them sometimes. >_> )

and then there are these bits:

Patrick can only hear the undertones of it, the lower, scratchy parts, but he sees the way Pete's lips pull away from his teeth when he does it and. God. Pete just looks desperate, like he's trying to taste Patrick's mouth through his skin, through hours-old contact.

just... yes.

and this is one of my favoritest parts: Patrick's heart twirls in a slow, happy litte circle. He licks Pete's bottom lip, presses a kiss to Pete's chin, and tries to figure out what to do with his hands while Pete kisses him again. He kisses like graffiti, tracing possession against the back of Patrick's teeth, the top of his mouth, with every slick twist of his tongue.

that's pretty much the best imagery ever and... and i'm trying so ( ... )

anonymous March 28 2008, 02:45:42 UTC

Oh wow that was really good.

-- "I've only had my Patrick for one day and I'm already breaking him?"

It is completely not possible to stay normal-colored when Pete Wentz is claiming you. --

Haha, loved that line. :)