fic: Patricksitting (Call It A Love Song) 2/3

[adellyna]

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[little_whittles]

Read and loved. So loved. I'd go on to read part three, but don't you know? I already did. ;P Amazing all around. I feel so snuggly and content now.

[adellyna]

*snuggles you* Yes. I was channeling a comfy blanket the whole time I was writing it. \o/

[shutyourface]

"I'm going to jail," Pete says, calmly, evenly. "And fuck, but I don't even care."
Amen, brother.

I think this is one of the best descriptions of first time sex I've ever read.

Also, silly Patrick. Who needs food when you have Pete?

[runner_bean]

She only drinks coffee at midnight/When the moment is not right/And the timing is quite unusual

I can't tell if you did that on purpose or not. Really like this story, by the way.

[adellyna]

You see, her confidence is tragic, but her intuition magic.

Gah, I love that song so much.

[punkrocker180]

i luv the fact u used a gone with the wind quote thingy in here! it just so happens that my name is scarlett. my mom had this thing for the book so me and my sisters are stuck as melanie, tara, and scarlett. we even named r dog ashley! it just ment a lot to me coz i neva c that n-e where.
and ur a kick ass writer. luv ur work! keep it up! ^_^

[jordanzgrl17]

Aww, it was so lovely, especially the awkward sex scene. I've yet to go to bed, and maybe if part three isn't too long, I'll make it there soon.

Doesn't Trick realize he can just dine on Peter? Silly 16 year old. :)