I'm on a roll now - it's all go.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Title: Shur'tugalar Rïsa.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot, even a bit of Merlin/Morgana. Later on, anyway.
Warnings: Violence, dragons, elves, magic. Y'know, fantasy stuff.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 3913 for this chapter.
Rating: PG. At the moment, anyway. Different chapters may change.

Comments

[book_worm_vicky]

Just have to say, the icon at the top of this, brilliant! 'Kay, I'm late again, aren't I? Sorry.

I think the description of the feast and the way the elves acted around Merlin was really good, and I loved how Arthur could see Merlin was unhappy, but didn't want to embarrass Merlin and so went through Aravae to talk to him.

"..You never look lonely when you are with me.” <--- THIS! OMG WOW! My grin is ridiculously big right now. I really, really adored this, in fact all of Merlin and Arthur's discussion after the feast was amazing! I love how Arthur can see right through Merlin, and can comfort him so well. I love how close they're becoming, don't even have words. Just wow

[adeina_rhyddha]

Thanks. I've used it before. Figured it was only fitting

[book_worm_vicky]

Damn my internet! They told me it was fixed, the liars! They have said it's fixed again, so hopefully they're telling the truth this time

[adeina_rhyddha]

Awww. Hopefully it's sorted now. x3

[book_worm_vicky]

Hope they're all going well!

I AM stalking you, it's called a friends-page ;D I don't bother to wait for permission for anything ;)

Hello, Dumbledore ;) Seriously though, excellent point. He really is very isolated, poor guy!

I think Arthur seems a lot more self-aware than Merlin in this, and he sometimes seems to know more about Merlin than Merlin does himself!

It's always a good idea to do that, yeah ;)

I think it's impossible to know your characters too well!

[adeina_rhyddha]

Meh. They are going okay.
Chemistry is killing my brain, but I'm feeling alright about biology.
Haha. How did I know? xDD
Yeah. I kind of feel bad for making him like that. But it fit and allowed me to do all this fun stuff between him and Arthur, so whatever.
Hm. I guess he does. He's sort of aware of his own short comings, though I think he's just scared of failing and not being good enough, because in Surda he always was good enough, and here he doesn't believe that he is. He totally does know more about Merlin, because Merlin doesn't even realise what he's doing, what he's showing on his face. Because he doesn't realise, it means he doesn't really know he is doing it.
Chapter seven has officially been started! Chyeah.
Oh, but I do!
I keep finding symbolism. I found some yesterday in chapter nine that I HAVEN'T EVEN STARTED WRITING YET. That is insane.

[book_worm_vicky]

Ugh, chemistry. Don't say that word ;) Physics was always the worst, though that might have been something to do with our totally incompetent teacher. :)

You need both good and bad sides to get a full story, and I think that's just what would happen.

Yeah, that's another great point! You really do know your characters exceptionally well!

Yay! *waits patiently*

LOL, I may have to agree with you on that...

[adeina_rhyddha]

Lawl.
Physics is too maths based for me.
Although, saying that, chemistry is pretty maths-y too. Just not quite as much as physics.
I know them too well - it is worrying. I keep seeing these random things all over the place.
Keep that patience up - I may be a while. x3
Haha. It's 'cause I know what I'm gonna write, and kind of how I'm gonna write it, and the more I thought about it, the more I saw.
I scare myself sometimes.

[book_worm_vicky]

I always liked Maths, I sort of found it easy, once you know the rule you will get the right answer. Which makes it even more weird that I was so bad at physics... Blame the teacher!!

I can wait *starts twitching* ;)

[adeina_rhyddha]

I hated it.
Didn't help that I was rubbish at it, really. xD
It's odd, really, 'cause I'm a pretty logical person. I was just never any good at maths.
Btw, I don't suppose you noticed that I wrote ANOTHER fic?
These ideas, they will kill me.
I thought you were commenting that, since you are a stalker. xD
Anyhow, I only tell you because you may like the outcome of the comments. Someone gave me another idea - honestly, go check it out.

[book_worm_vicky]

LOL, no, I think that might make it a bit harder to enjoy ;) Yeah, I definitely a logical person too, but I really can't do physics, and the only creative thing I'm any good at is English, which is then my best subject. :S It's all very strange. ;)

Just finished the comment before replying to this! xD I do very much like that other idea too.... *zones out again*

[adeina_rhyddha]

Yeah.
And because I was rubbish at it, I never really tried very hard.
I mean, I passed it at GCSE, but whatever. If I'd tried, I might have done a bit better.
I'm good at English and science. Always have been. Maths has always been my weakest.
Haha, I noticed. xD
Yes, I figured you might. I am working on it right now. Should be up t'night. x3

[book_worm_vicky]

I was always like that in things like Art and Music, I probably could have done okay, but I always knew there was no way in hell I would take then for GCSE, so I just didn't bother.

YAY! *claps* You know, the land of RPS is not that far from where you are... *entices you* No. Stop. Must. Not. Read. RPS. It is wrong. ... *rushes over the bradleycolin* ;D

[adeina_rhyddha]

I sucked at art and music. It wasn't that I didn't try, it was just that I was crap at them. xDDD
I took drama at GCSE for my creative one. It was the only one I was even halfway good at. xDD
Haha.
I haven't read much, but that isn't to say I dislike it. Just that I've yet to venture over there. xDDDDD

[book_worm_vicky]

Replying up here so you can read it ;)

LOL, this I understand, though I didn't try either. NO, that's a lie, I tried on my Year 8 project and now I think about it that turned out... okay. Despite me spending about 3 times as long as everyone else on it ;)

If I had had to pick a creative subject it would have been Music, probably. No, wait, that's got a performance section, so perhaps not... I was no good at Drama either, I just got really embarrassed.

It's come to the stage where it is entirely possible I love it more than Merlin. Which is both shocking and most probabky wrong. Okay, so that's actually not true, not now I think about it, but you get my point. What I love about Colin/Bradley is that I can actually see it being real, whereas you know that Merlin/Arthur is never going to happen, which is a shame :(

Yeah, I tend to rant when RPS comes up ;) Just ignore me. :D

[adeina_rhyddha]

Haha. xD
We talk a lot, don't we? x3
I was rubbish at music theory, and I can't draw for shit. I love drama and I was fairly good at it. It helped me feel less embarrassed, if I am being honest. And my group was awesome - there were seven of us, all girls - so that helped, too.
Aww.
Naw, I get where you are coming from.
I should read some. xD
Also, MerlinxArthur is SO gonna happen.
...
In our dreams. x3