I hate exam season. So very, very much.
Title: Shur'tugalar Rïsa.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot. Later on, anyway.
Warnings: Violence, dragons, elves, magic. Y'know, fantasy stuff.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 4216 for this chapter.
Rating: PG. At the moment, anyway. Different chapters may change.
Summary: AU, based on the ( Read more... )
I loved the bit when Arthur was using magic and got so frustrated he used too much, unlucky Mordred! And he lost control over the magic on his eyes, fail Mordred, fail. He so deserved it! I loved Merlin's worry over Arthur too, before he woke up. That was great.
When Merlin was treating Arthur's wounds... oh god, the UST! Wow! *hits Merlin* How blind are you? Realise you fancy the guy, realise he fancies you, then kiss him for god's sake!! That was incredible.
Arthur threw up on Aravae! *bursts out laughing* That was so great, I really, really loved it! I laughed along with Merlin and Vesparr, even though I did feel bad for Arthur; how embarrassing! 'You threw up too?' 'Ah... no.' Aravae's reaction in the whole of that scene was really good, I could just hear her disgusted tone of voice when she told Merlin what had happened, and her sigh was a really great touch ( ... )
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Exactly, I think you really portrayed that well when we saw Merlin with the elves, and when he thought about it. LOL, well, it all seems to turn out well when you haven't planned, so I'm looking forward to it ;)
Should be fun ;)
How come you can express this so much more eloquently than me? *sulks* ;) That's very true, I think he has to put on a front for the elves because he can't really show any weakness as he is the last rider, their last hope, and they already doubt him because he is 'broken'. That's an excellent point about how Merlin felt after Mordred, poor guy!
LOL, tat's just proof of how well you know your characters. :D Actually, that's something I always thought when we did coursework, especially for GSCE's, in english, how much of this do the writers actually think of when they write it? Just about... none! ;)
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I totally meant to write wouldn't instead of would. Gwah, there is something wrong with me. No one ever objects to nekkid!Arthur.
Sometimes it does. Like I said, I plan the big events and write around them. It's just the way I roll. x3
I...have no idea. Sometimes, when I think about it, I can be pretty good with words. Most of the time, however, I stumble over them and make an idiot out of myself. Especially when presented with a hot guy. xDD
He'd miss Arthur if he died, even though he'd never admit to it.
I guess it is. I just go through and look at it and analyse stuff and I realise how much I haven't said. But then again, I can't write everything, so I just have to hope it comes across the same way I see it.
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I guess it was the thinking part that was the issue for me, lack of brain often makes that hard ;) *snorfle* This I understand ;)
Bet he would!
I often think it's better when people don't write stuff, but you get it anyway just through the way they've written it, which is something you do very well.
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Lawl. Well, I'm pretty brainless at times. But sometimes, just sometimes, I manage to come up with something halfway intelligent.
He would. Deffo.
Later chapters...oh, dear, later chapters are going to be SO MUCH FUN.
Aw!
Thank you. Sometimes I'm sure that no one besides me will ever see my weird hidden meanings.
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I tend to reserve any hints of intelligence for school, where I actually do quite well, I think there's something in my house that kills my brain ;)
I am SO looking forward to them!
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