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cider_jelly September 19 2012, 15:32:14 UTC
Jesus! I really love your bitching Cas, "It’s yoga, Dean. Not ballet.” Cas explained, his voice taking on a snippier tone. “Stop complaining or we aren’t stopping for ice cream after.” lol

Keep going Cas, there's a puppy inside Dean , you know for sure!

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adeerfriend September 19 2012, 18:49:14 UTC
Dean just has to weather the storm of bitchy!Cas. Then Cas will find Dean's gooey caramel center.

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mizixy September 19 2012, 15:44:20 UTC
Cas is such a dick, but at least he has his priorities straight. Dean does have an ass that won't quit. Oh and can I say, as much as I love angsting out, I really find the lack of such so refreshing. Dickish!BAMF!Cas is making me all tingly.

Dean's being such a baby, though I thought it interesting he pulled the "rest of my life card" on what was essentially their second date. Oh and Cas pulling the food card on Dean ... priceless! Though, if your Dean is canon with his desserts,
Cas probably would have gotten less lip if he'd offered pie, *and* possibly ice cream.

Bwhahahaha. Lisa wanted herself a piece of Dean, but nope. No Dean for you!

Yay a traumatized Sam moment, much love on that end. Even bigger love on Jess. Way to work around the curve in your mindfuckery of Sam.

Oh and that article *shivers* such a delicious reaming.

I guess the above comment is what happens when the first thing a non-morning person does is read fanfics.

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adeerfriend September 19 2012, 18:51:06 UTC
It's great! I love these comprehensive reviews, it let's me know what I'm doing right (and what I'm doing wrong). Thanks for reading!

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adeerfriend September 19 2012, 18:51:38 UTC
Aw, shucks. Thanks, dude! Keep reading!

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Edition #2,338 livejournal September 20 2012, 04:17:56 UTC
User heard_the_owl referenced to your post from Edition #2,338 saying: [...] by(Dean/Castiel, Jess/Sam, Jo/Anna. Brief Dean/Jo, Castiel/OMC, Dean/OMC; Nc-17) Red Hood [...]

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eridanie September 20 2012, 06:14:36 UTC
Aaawwwww... The image of Dean lying around on the floor for three days is so pathetic and cute! What a drama queen!

And LOL the athletic sex rants and poor Sam's ears! That is so hilarious!

This is so cute so far. I can't wait for more :D

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adeerfriend September 20 2012, 09:19:09 UTC
Thanks so much! Keep reading!

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