can you..?

[addictionsenvy]

can you hear that sound?
that's my heart breaking...
can you see the rain?
those are my tears falling...
can you smell that air?
thats the scent of defeat
can you feel this pain?
thats my world falling away...
can you taste it when you sleep?
thats the taste of hatred...
you should know this
for it is bred in your temples
it is raised in your lands
and it thrives in your heart
the very beating of our heart
can't you see what your doing?
can't you feel that it's wrong?
don't you know how much it hurts?
to know that your forever gone...?
can you feel that shaking?
it's my wrists as they hold up my head
can you not see that i'm trembling?
can you not see that i am almost dead...?

and yes jess.. that ones all original...
put some music to it for me :)