House of Eros Stardust Chapter 4 Onew/Taemin R

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Title: House of Eros - Stardust - Chapter 4
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 5300
Genre: AU/Romance/Angst
Rating: R
Summary: Onew has come up with a strategy to help Taemin finally tell him the truth about his former Master.. Please see stardust tag for previous chapters.
A/N:Maestro is Italian for Master (usually Master of arts but we won't quibble)

Comments

[kyttenfae]

I really can understand why this chapter was so hard for you to write, but I'm really proud of you for getting through it, and thankful you were able to. *hugs!* That aside, wow, intense doesn't cover it, and I'm so glad Taemin was finally able to break through and trust Jinki enough to tell him everything.

[addicterated]

I honestly cried over this damn thing even though I knew almost from the first paragraph what had happened to Taemin and where, to an extent, things would have to go in order for there to be a happily ever after. There will be one, and this is part of it, thanks for reading and being my sounding board too, bb. :)

[ontaejongminkey]

I wanna know who that-that man is! He deserves to feel Onew's rage! hdfslkjhflhflfhslkfhlkg
Poor Taeminnie T^T

Anyway, perfect and intense as always!
*dances around*

[addicterated]

Thank you thank you. Paybacks are hell, the bad guy will find :D

[5_dorra]

god this story is beautiful. i love jinkis character so fucking much :(
i dont know what else to say i dont read angst so often because it always just leaves me so speechless and emotional and i cant form words alksjnlas i love this ♥

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I don't care for angst myself much. It hurts. I love my boys so much both as characters and as people that I hate making them suffer but in this case, it's a bit of a trial by fire. The only way they can ever be truly happy is if they get through this and they will together. Thank you :)

[addicterated]

I think that any sub has to be able to depend utterly on their dom or Master or whatever you want to call them. It's not that Onew doesn't have weaknesses, as we see, he suffers pain and stuff the same as any man. It's that he's able to control what he feels in order to be what his boy needs him to be. He is a very strong man and strength like that is something I admire.

I don't think your comment was crappy, I think you got exactly what I was showing here. Thank you very much :)

[min7girl]

I'm glad I'm waking up to this and not falling asleep to it. I had a feeling this story was going to go down the path of what happened to Taemin in the past.

Onew suffered so much in order to release Taemin. He broke down trying to fix things and Taemin suffering will be so much less now for having it out.

And how dare an asshole use his sub like that?!?!?!?! Holy fucking hell, shit like that pisses me off to no end. It just damn... grrrrrr. I don't have the words for how pissed off I am. If they even got into this kind of relationship at all, it means that some of the psychology behind why a sub is on his damn knees has been explored and for the love of all that is holy, if a dom exploits that willingly....grrrrrrr. It isn't only cruel, it is disgusting beyond belief and the bastard needs to have his balls removed!!!!

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Precisely why Jinki/Onew is so upset. And also why he had to get Taemin to let it out, he and Taemin can never be what they should be until Taemin embraces the fact that he is not and never was the one at fault and that he has been abused in a way that is ...simply evil.

This broke my heart to write but almost from the beginning I knew what had happened to Taemin and I knew it would have to come out. I will give better response later, getting ready to drive up to Dumfries to stay at bro's a few days and watch dogs.