Possession NC17

Jun 23, 2011 04:22

Where do I even start with the story of this story. This is one of the fics requested from the help_japan auction. I wrote it first...well I don't know why it just came out that way. And I started work on it almost immediately but it was a difficult request to write in someways because it seemed to give birth to a Dark!Jinki and Dark!Jinki is tough ( Read more... )

help_japan, ontae, my fic, taemin, jinki, onew

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fuckingtaemin June 23 2011, 08:23:23 UTC
MY SPOT. MINE.

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fuckingtaemin June 23 2011, 09:04:27 UTC
This is the gif!

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jinkibumiminho June 23 2011, 09:11:25 UTC
The gif...sweet effing Siwon...he actually flails and giggles, doesn't he? My life is complete.

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fuckingtaemin June 23 2011, 09:14:18 UTC
Pretty much, and the only thing I could think is "how sensitive are his nipples?" OTL

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jinkibumiminho June 23 2011, 08:35:45 UTC
SPOT! I am so staying up to read this!
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and then there’s the slow, steady, perfect surge of Jinki’s beautiful big dick into Taemin’s starving body.

Damn, baby. You write dark!Jinki so well. I especially like the hint of subjugated disapproval coming off the other members, combined with the open door. Kinky!
He makes a statement out of bending his head and licking a stripe over Taemin's throat.
WTF? Alpha male, indeed!
Brava!!!

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addicterated June 23 2011, 22:32:35 UTC
Yeah, although in a lot of ways I do see Jinki as the alpha male of the group, (albeit he keeps it understated a lot of the time and is extremely generous with wanting the others to shine for their talent etc), this took it waaaay farther than I think he ever would for real.

Hence Dark!Jinki lol. <3 Glad you enjoyed it.

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kaybee38 June 23 2011, 11:25:57 UTC
Holy Mother of everything! This was so hot I can't even... I mean the way Jinki actually licks him when the movie is over, I half expected him to sit Taemin on the floor, pull out his stuff and pee in a circle around him! And then the rimming, and the delayed release, and Jinki's filthy mouth! And even the I love you's in four langguages...you are made of WIN!

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addicterated June 23 2011, 22:33:23 UTC
<3333 Glad you liked it bb. LOL, I laughed and laughed at the peeing in a circle thing cause that's pretty much what he did without the actual peeing rofl.

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min7girl June 23 2011, 11:55:57 UTC
I would key smash, but I don't have enough keys.

This is beyond amazing. Jinki being a the jealous possessor and putting it out there for everyone in the group to hear and maybe see. yep. This was hot. You hit on many of my fav things in the word with this. I'm once again so happy that I found you one day while looking up fanfics cause... just damn ...things get changed when you write. I change. and damn this was good!!!!

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addicterated June 23 2011, 22:33:56 UTC
I am so glad I found you too bb. Really really. And I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)

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imvus June 23 2011, 14:43:38 UTC
O. M. G. that was so.............H.O.T.

Someone hose me down. What the heck is wrong with the rest of them. I would have been peeking through the door (like the perve I am for Ontae) if I heard all that going on!

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addicterated June 23 2011, 22:41:50 UTC
I imagine it's fear really. As much as this Jinki wants to stake his claim in no uncertain terms, I think if they actually tried to come in the room - it would not be good.

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imvus June 23 2011, 22:58:22 UTC
Well, the way you wrote the interaction with Onew and Key.... I don't know..... Key seemed really pissed and wanted to protect Taemin there from Onew's possessiveness and inappropriate behavior in the living room but I could so see jonghyun liking it...lol

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addicterated June 24 2011, 00:52:48 UTC
Jonghyun is such a horn dog, lolol, and yeah I really almost had a scene with Key but i thought that would detract so i left it out.

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