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I Call The Shots - chapter 3

Mar 02, 2011 20:08

Title: I Call The Shots - Chapter 3
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4200
Genre: Romance/Fluff/ Master-slave or Dom-sub whichever way you want to look at it
Rating: NC17
Summary: Jinki and Taemin take steps forward in their relationship.
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up ( Read more... )

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Comments 47

kaybee38 March 3 2011, 01:23:56 UTC

NINJA SPOT!!

kaybee38 March 3 2011, 01:49:49 UTC

BRILLIANT! And yes there had BETTER be a part 2! I think it's really interesting how you brought the other bandmates into it, and how Minho is so unsure of the whole thing. I LOVE how Key, dressed them both! I think you're really doing a service to all the readers/writers out there who think they know what a real d/s relationship is. It's not all leather, whips and chains, there are really some rules, and there's love and responsibility involved. If Jinki didn't love Taemin, he would never put a collar on him. LOVE this!

addicterated March 6 2011, 18:54:05 UTC

If Jinki didn't love Taemin, he would never put a collar on him

This is really the nutshell. I mean there's lots of reasons why people might be involved in this and not all of them are romantic (or even sexual for that matter) but for Jinki - it's all about Taemin. He'd have no reason to even explore this otherwise.

And yeah I'm working on part 2, I swears Unnie.

Sorry it's taking so long for me to comment, seems like not enough time to do everything I wanna do. *huggles* Thanks for reading and commenting.

kaybee38 March 3 2011, 01:54:15 UTC

Oh and Tiff has seen this before, but I'm seeing this pic again in my head.

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stjoan4eva March 3 2011, 01:44:00 UTC

Spot because even though I read through it, had a nosebleed, and loved it, I need more time to write out a long comment, and this deserved a long comment.

addicterated March 6 2011, 18:55:24 UTC

Hee! I am so glad you liked it so much and that you're staying with me through it. *whispers* Kinda looking for that long comment, I love when people discuss fic with me. *huggles you tight*

kyttenfae March 3 2011, 01:47:20 UTC

*whimpers* *flails* *tries to regain thought, fails*

Gnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

That was gorgeous and SO hot and sextastic and so sweet and beautiful and GNNNNNNNN!!!!

Imma going to re-read this later when I'm not on my way to church *shifty eyes*

(Oh and your links at the end are the same link <3)

addicterated March 6 2011, 18:56:12 UTC

Ooh, church. Boy I am bad timing. And I miss you!

I fixed the link and can't wait for you to come back and talk to me and stuff. Glad you liked it though bb <3

anapp March 3 2011, 02:34:54 UTC

OMG LET ME CRY A FUCKING RIVER

( ... )

addicterated March 6 2011, 18:57:57 UTC

I really really loved this comment times 100 percent. I am sorry it got screened, and will try to fix that asap.

And, it's so very important to me to try to make this sound realistic and the fact they are learning as they go helps make it so I can explain at the same time so it's hopefully not confusing. I'm glad that seems to be working for you, means a lot to me, more than I can even tell you.

Please stay with me cause more will be coming. Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

jinkibumiminho March 3 2011, 02:41:10 UTC

Huh...huh...huhhhh...haaaaaaaawwwwttt!!!
Someone's been doing reasearch.
I can't even...
I'm going back to read again from the beginning of the series.
Oh, sweet Shisus...

jinkibumiminho March 3 2011, 05:29:30 UTC

Okay, I read from Ready or Not all the way back through, and I love the way you've handled the transition from Taemin jumping poor, frustrated, unsuspecting Jinki, to sort of the inverse relationship.
I adore Onew, so imagining Mr. Responsible and Adorkable with all this "kink" bottled up inside, waiting to be unleashed by Taemin is...stirring, to say the least.
Brava!

addicterated March 6 2011, 19:00:34 UTC

Okay so...just to make sure you understand...Ready or Not is SEPARATE from Shots. and Shots is SEPARATE from Eros, (though in a way I suppose they very much could be seen as a progression, lol)

Yes, well I think Mr Responsible and Adorkable is a man of hidden depths as it were and I find it super easy to imagine him as sekritly kinktastical - partly cause he is responsible and partly because ...i mean have you SEEN the way he gets his sexy on sometimes in performances? *hugs again* glad you liked*

addicterated March 6 2011, 18:58:45 UTC

Yup. Jinki very much strikes me as the kind of person who will try to find out everything he can on a given subject and I'm sure even in Korea there must be books or something. I'm so glad you liked it sweetie. *hugs*