Dirty Deeds

Dec 10, 2010 21:52

Title: Dirty Deeds
Pairing: KyuHae
Length: 2069
Genre: Dub Con, Smuttiness
Rating: NC17
Summary:  KyuHyun thinks he's safe, but he's soooo not.
Warning: Warning for use of drugs, handcuffs, dubious consent, my general lamosity.
A/N Takes place after Through the Glass Written for my friend and general egger onner Cablackwood

The odd thing, the very oddest thing )

kyuhyun, my fic, kyuhae, idek, why me god, sexy

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cablackwood December 11 2010, 03:28:46 UTC
O_O

_______________ <-- *that is my heart beat, cause I have DIED!*
and not just cause it's Kyuhae

Ooooo once Kyu remembers/finds out that Donghae drugged him......his ass is going to be RIPPED BIG TIME! *giggles for thinking about it in a dirty way* xD

KyuHyun realizes his nipples are poking up against his own tee shirt
I don't know why, but that line made me laugh and *die* in a fangirly fashion xD

.......Um, I was going to say more but, TOTAL brainfart and now I can't remember :\

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addicterated December 11 2010, 03:30:29 UTC
LOL. Um...as long as you don't think it's totally lame...I was feeling a bit iffy about it's quality.

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cablackwood December 11 2010, 03:35:57 UTC
It wasn't lame or poor quality ^_^ but you/I can tell that its not a normal pairing for you

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addicterated December 11 2010, 03:37:14 UTC
well a) i was trying to do less plot, more sex and b) I wanted to write something you would enjoy :D

i really truly hope you liked it and i'll unlock it/cross post it in a bit.

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hit0rigurashi December 11 2010, 07:50:47 UTC
I LOVE IT!!!! BIG TIME!!!
DongHae's so HOT HOT HOT here!!!!
i'm allowed to comment right? kekeke

Sequel please....
want to find out what kyu's gonna do about it...
i guess Hae's gonna be in really BIG trouble... *naughty*

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addicterated December 11 2010, 08:19:46 UTC
of course you're allowed to comment. Glad you liked it...

Yep, Hae's gonna be in trouble, heeeee

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shanancelice December 11 2010, 08:44:40 UTC
WAIIII~~~~~ You write a sequel!!!! You actually do!!!! And it's smut and... I'm speechless right now :P

I have to thank you for that, despite the fact that u write it for your friend cablackwood (I have to thank her too ^^), I understand it is not easy to write a couple that isn't your OTP :D

The short scene in the livingroom is good enough to make me shiver (Oww~ I just love ur way of describing Hae <3, definitely seme-like). The smut is intense even though mostly was the teasing, stimulating of bad Hae. As for Kyu, u write about his feeling both physical and mental, the effect of the drug on his body and mind, and I could imagine it clearly...

Somehow, I love the part when he said Hae was cruel a lot :p~

Now I wonder what will happen between them after this... if it's not for the drug, would he ever let Hae do that?

Ow~ it's not ur OTP and u make people craving for a sequel after every Kyuhae fic.

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addicterated December 11 2010, 08:53:04 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it then :) LOL

and I have no idea, he's gonna be mad when he realized what DongHae did so you never know.

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negativesunset December 12 2010, 05:32:47 UTC
that was sooooo intense(o.o)
and this soooooooo need a continuation :3
it should end with a happy kyuhae :(

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addicterated December 12 2010, 05:33:26 UTC
I totally can't promise that. I have weirdo muses. :D But we'll see.

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teadorotequiero December 12 2010, 06:55:16 UTC
YaY kyuhae!!!

this was so good but i want to know what happens next 0.0

i like negativesunset idea!!!

by the way i <3 ur fics!!! :)

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addicterated December 12 2010, 13:19:18 UTC
Ooh, thank you, verymuch for the kind words. We'll see what happens :)

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