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Stardust - House of Eros Chapter 6 PG15 edited 3/3/12

Nov 14, 2011 08:50

Title: Stardust Chapter 6
Pairing: Onew/Taemin, ninja Siwon/Sungmin
Length: 4133 4624
Genre: BDSM/drama/romance/angst
Rating: PG15
Summary: Taemin leaves Onew, Onew finds out who was responsible for the files, Onew goes after Taemin.
Warnings: swearing, angst, lots of exposition, takes place immediately after or even during Chapter 5
Disclaimer: ( Read more... )

ontae, my fic, my fic: stardust, taemin, onew, rewrite

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min7girl November 14 2011, 14:35:12 UTC

Ooooooo, Taemin is going to get it. *giggles* Maestro has to punish his naughty boy for running away. *JOY*

Why does that make me all kinds of happy?

addicterated November 14 2011, 14:37:30 UTC

well did you like the rest of it woman!?

min7girl November 14 2011, 14:39:14 UTC

DUH!!!!!, you just left me in such anticipation for the punishment that's all I can think about right now.

addicterated November 14 2011, 14:42:23 UTC

in this case it'll be like make up punishment rofl

min7girl November 14 2011, 14:52:28 UTC

Yes Onew has to make it up to his stella for ignoring his needs all this time. He has to show hm how much he loves him. *giggles* I'm sooo happy. They're together again!

min7girl November 14 2011, 14:46:32 UTC

You know I love jinki sexy baby in leather. and you gave him a hot leather outfit to tease the piss out of Taemin in. Cause damn he knew what he was doing when he went to go collect him. He was going to make his star regret ever even thinking of going anywhere with just a look.

And Taemin and him having their misunderstanding of purpose and need. Taemin needing for Onew to touch him and make things right and Onew needing to Taemin to feel safe as well as actually be safe. Neither of them giving the other what they wanted.

*sigh* yes I'm focused on the punishment now. The re-harnessing of a star with a simple collar. won't be enough although with the way you write it might be just putting the collar back on that gets everyone of your readers worked up.

addicterated November 14 2011, 14:52:04 UTC

Well you notice, Onew isn't immediately rushing to put it back on. And I think people often do this, they give people what they think they need rather than what they *actually* want. And it causes loads of misunderstanding just like this. I think Onew is wise to have Taemin put the shoe on the other foot so he can see why Onew acted as he did. And yeah, the leather outfit...i have a leather .."thing" so i tend to give that fetishy response to Taemin so I can stick Jinki in leather rawr. This is a much less straight laced and buttoned up kind of leather. The whip scene i pictured like a full leather outfit and kind of hard leather. This scene is a much softer leather and it mingles silk with it...so it's all, touch me baby ...etc.

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