30 days of writing challenge - on/tae - restless day 1

Aug 15, 2012 19:12

So a lot of writers seem to be partaking of this challenge and it seemed like just the sort of thing I could use to keep me going. The challenge originates here.

This is 758 words. Taemin always wakes up at the same time every night.Almost every night, in the deadest and darkest part of the night - Taemin wakes up. And no matter how tired he is or ( Read more... )

prompt: restless, on/tae, 30 days of writing challenge

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princesalunar August 16 2012, 02:46:04 UTC
can I say how much I love your fics? ontae is not my otp but with this amazing writing I can say that this ontae love is growing on me *0*

"'I miss you too, aegi,' Jinki says quietly.." jdflkjdklfjdslf you killed me with that ♥

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addicterated August 17 2012, 06:50:02 UTC
<3 I'm so glad you enjoy it, even though it's not your pairing. I love these two together so much :)

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min7girl August 16 2012, 03:03:11 UTC
Oh god. Why make me hurt first thing when I wake up?

Taemin's longing is so lyrical in this. Very happy to see you are taking up this kind of challenge too. I look forward to the rest of them.

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addicterated August 17 2012, 06:50:34 UTC
Next one is up :) And sorry to hurt you but I think I really need to work this out in my own mind, about them. :)

Glad you liked. Thank you

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kaybee38 August 16 2012, 04:21:32 UTC
this is incredibly sweet and emotional. :)

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addicterated August 17 2012, 06:50:48 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

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suntea6 August 16 2012, 06:10:03 UTC
Aww until the halfway mark I was smiling and thinking how fluffy this drabble was but then I was hit by "He's the one that made Jinki's heart break into a thousand pieces like a million years worth of bad luck on the kitchen floor."

It was so sad and so sweet and I hope that the Onew and Taemin in this universe make up :)

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addicterated August 17 2012, 06:51:32 UTC
For a long time I have thought that the real On/Tae were on a break or something, if we assume they had a something before that. This is my way, I guess of working that out in my own head. Thank you :)

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mistresalie August 16 2012, 18:51:02 UTC
MY heart is positively aching! The depth of Taemin's restlessness increased tenfold with this
He's the one who was restless and wanted to try things with other people. He's the one that made Jinki's heart break into a thousand pieces like a million years worth of bad luck on the kitchen floor.
You had my heart in some hundreds of pieces towards the end smfhjkshfkjahdfjkshflkshfka
Hope you're well rested for now and feeling better! Much loves from my 3am incoherent self <3

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addicterated August 17 2012, 06:52:03 UTC
Thank you thank you *hugs* I admit I kind of made myself tear up a bit. Glad you liked and I'm okay :)

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