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Super Junior (Hankyung/Hyukjae, with peripheral Heechul/Donghae/Kibum(/Eeteuk))
2,352 words. PG-13. Third person.
( Hyukjae looks at his paper, and ignores the slide of Hankyung’s vowels and they way they sit in the back of his mouth like round peppermint candies. )
Super Junior (Hankyung/Hyukjae, with peripheral Heechul/Donghae/Kibum(/Eeteuk))
2,352 words. PG-13. Third person.
( Hyukjae looks at his paper, and ignores the slide of Hankyung’s vowels and they way they sit in the back of his mouth like round peppermint candies. )
SECONDLY, I LOVE YOUR HYUKJAE VOICE. JUST HOW HE'S SO STILTED, IT'S LIKE HE THINKS IN STOPS INSTEAD OF MOTION, LIKE, JUNSU'S THOUGHTS WOULD BE LIKE A LIVEWIRE RUNNING FROM ONE END TO THE OTHER AND HYUKJAE'S IS INSTEAD LIKE A PERFORATION, STOPSTOPSTOP, AND IT'S SO VERY AWKWARD, BUT IT TOTALLY WORKS.
AND I LOVE HOW HANKYUNG IS SO MUCH WITH THE SMOOTH. FROM HYUKJAE'S EYES, HE'S LIKE THIS STRANGE BEING WHO JUST COMES INTO THEIR LIVES, AND IT'S ALMOST LIKE HE'S A BIT ETHEREAL, PERFECT TO THE EXTENT OF BEING MYSTICAL. HE'S SO DIFFERENT FROM EVERYONE ELSE AROUND HYUKJAE, AND IT MAKES HIM ALMOST UNREAL, WHICH IS REALLY NEAT. ACTUALLY, I'D LOVE TO SEE HOW THIS PLAYS OUT FROM HANKYUNG'S PERSPECTIVE, CAUSE I HAVE THE FEELING IT'D BE REALLY DIFFERENT.
AND THEN THERE'S THE WAY THAT HANKYUNG TALKS THE WAY HYUKJAE THINKS, STOPGAPS OF MOTION, BUT HANKYUNG IS REALLY GRACEFUL EVERY OTHER WAY, AND IT'S JUST THAT HE CAN'T GET HIS TEETH AROUND KOREAN, AND IT'S JUST THIS REALLY NEAT AND SUBTLE JUXTAPOSITION OF THE TWO OF THEM.
AND I REALLY LIKE HOW IN THE DRUNK!PART, HYUKJAE'S THOUGHTS START SMOOTHING OUT INTO REAL SENTENCES, LONG AND FLOWING, AND IT'S LIKE THE DRUNK-NESS TAKES AWAY ALL HIS SOCIAL AWKWARD. AND YOU KNOW I AM ALL FOR THE MOTHERFUCKING PRINCESSES AND THEIR KITTY :DDDD, ADLFKAJLS. SO MUCH OF THE CUTE WTF.
AND LIKE THE KIHYUK NEARLY KILLED ME WITH THE LAUGHING, SO MUCH AWESOME. I THINK THEIR EXCHANGE IS MY FAVOURITE PART IN THIS FIC, WELL, SAVING THE KITEUKCHULHAE, JUST OUT OF PRINCIPLE. ♥ MADDY YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE WORLD!DOMINATION!FIC ALDKFJADLKFSA. MORE KIHYUK PLEASE! KIBUM ANNEXING HYUKJAE, HOW CAN YOU RESIST WRITING THAT! *_______*
AND D'AAAAAW THE ENDING. LIKE HANKYUNG'S AWKWARD IS IN THAT HE CAN'T EXPRESS HIMSELF IN WORDS SO HE EXPRESSES HIMSELF IN MOTIONS AND LIKE, HAHAHA, JUNSU IS PROBABLY ON THE OTHER SIDE THINKING OMG PERV ON HYUK OR MORE SLEEP, PERV ON HYUK OR MORE SLEEP!!! AND ENDS UP GOING BACK TO SLEEP BUT RECORDING FOR LATER BLACKMAIL MATERIAL. ♥
I LOVE YOU MADDY A LOT A LOT!!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥!!!!!!
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THE TITLE TOOK ME A BIT, BUT REALLY. HYUKJAE TOTALLY IS. THAT, AND A TEENAGE GIRL WTF. I'M GLAD THAT YOU LIKE HOW HE SPEAKS AND THINKS, BECAUSE REALLY? I CAN ONLY SEE HIM AS INCREDIBLE FAIL, SO. BUT IT'S A LOT OF FUN TO WRITE HIM LIKE THIS, ANYWAY.
HANKYUNG'S POV WOULD BE SO MUCH DIFFERENT THAN HYUKJAE'S, BECAUSE, REALLY, HANKYUNG ISN'T QUITE AS ETHEREAL AS HYUKJAE THINKS THAT HE IS. BUT I CAN SEE WHAT A CHANGE IN PERSPECTIVE WOULD BE INTERESTING. HANKYUNG, IN SOME WAYS, IS REALLY DIFFERENT FROM THE REST OF SUJU. PART OF IT, OBVIOUSLY, IS THE LANGUAGE BARRIER, AND ALSO, SEEING AS HE IS NEW IN THIS FIC, HE DOESN'T QUITE FIT YET. HE DOESN'T REALLY HAVE A PLACE.
DRUNKNESS MAKES HYUKJAE MORE FORWARD, AT LEAST, SEEING AS THE KISSING HAPPENED. BUT WRITING DRUNK PEOPLE IS ALWAYS FUN FOR ME. IT'S HOW BEING DRUNK SEEMS TO ME, YOU KNOW? LIKE TIME IS SLOWED DOWN AND SMOOTHED OUT, KIND OF LIKE HONEY. LIKE EVERYTHING IS BURIED UNDER A LATER OF HONEY. AND I THINK THAT IS ANYTHING COULD MAKE HYUKJAE LESS AWKWARD, IT WOULD BE ALCOHOL. (AND YES, THE SLUTS. I WANT TO WRITE THEM A PROPER ORGY FIC, BUT WE'LL HAVE TO SEE HOW THAT WORKS OUT. :D)
SLERGH I WASN'T SURE ABOUT THE KIHYUK AT FIRST! CAUSE I WASN'T SURE WHAT I WANTED TO SECTION TO DO, BUT THEN I FIGURED IT OUT, AND I'M GLAD THAT IT WORKS FOR YOU. IT WAS A LOT OF FUN TO WRITE! (AND YES, THE WORLD DOMINATION THING IS MY NEXT BIT, BUT I'M PLANNING ON IT BEING A DRABBLE MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE, BECAUSE IT MIGHT LOSE HUMOR IF I TRY TO SUSTAIN IT.)
JUNSU IS SO PERVING OUT. AND THEN HE'S GOING TO GO RUN OFF AND MAKE OUT WITH CHANGMIN, AND THEN HE'S GOING TO PESTER HYUKJAE FOREVER AND NEVER LET HIM LIVE IT DOWN.
I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE THIS! I LOVE YOU KOU!!!!!!! LIKE A LOT A LOT, SO SAYS HYUKJAE THE TEENAGE GIRL. ♥♥♥!!!
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I AM ALL FOR THIS ORGY FIC, YES. SO MUCH FOR THIS ORGYFIC LIKE YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE. AND THE WORLD DOMINATION FIC/DRABBLE/WHATEVER, BECAUSE LAKDFJLASDF. YES.
♥ ♥ ♥ *KEEPS YOUUUUU. FOREVEREVER, IN VALLEYSLANG!*
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THERE MAY OR MAY NOT BE A FAUX-UN. ALSO, I THINK I MAY HAVE DECIDED THAT HYUKJAE IS BELGIUM. UM. I DO NOT KNOW WHAT IS WRONG WITH MY BRAIN, AHAHAHAHAH.
♥♥♥ ::KEEPS YOU FOR LIKE, LONGER.::
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AND OMG HAHAHAH. FAUX-UN *DIES* MORE LIKE FAUX AXIS OF POWERS? XD. AND LOL. POOR HYUKFACE. XD.
♥ *hearts; ♥!!! *LANGUISHES IN YOUR CLOSET*
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