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Sep 24, 2006 23:12

Title: Rose Water
Fandom: DBSK
Pairing: MinSu
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don’t own.
Summary: You want to taste his words in your mouth, roll them around on your tongue and see how they feel.
Notes: 852 words, drabble-ish. Second person. Vaguely disjointed.

You want to taste his words in your mouth, roll them around on your tongue and see how they feel. )

fandom: dbsk, pairing: changmin/junsu

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x_voracity September 25 2006, 03:25:24 UTC
OMG. So amazing♥ I'm speechless. Maybe I'll be cohoerent later.
Loved the last line.

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:25:12 UTC
Thaaaank you! ♥ I am glad that you like it. :D

I do like that last line a lot, myself.

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wishpaper September 25 2006, 03:37:00 UTC
just beautiful. amazing, sensory, sensual language, gorgeous imagery. I love your way with words. I keep trying to find a favorite part to point out to you, but the whole thing is my favorite part, I think. ♥

+1000000000000 points for not making the babies disgustingly innocent. I love you. :]

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:28:59 UTC
You always leave me the most amazing comments, thank you! ♥ I had so much fun writing this one, I'm glad that you like it.

MinSu being my favorite of the DBSK pairings, I'm always happy to know when I haven't screwed up their dynamic. Ily too. :D

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wishpaper September 25 2006, 06:45:25 UTC
that's because you always leave me the most amazing fics! ~_^ this one was a lot of fun the read, too - not angstastic! XD

it seems minsu fans are few and far between; you have no idea how happy it makes to to have such a good writer giving them such love. you really know how to makes them work. ♥

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 17:25:24 UTC
I know, for once I didn't make everyone involved want to die! I was surprised, myself.

You're right about there being not much of a following. I'm just happy not to be the only person who can see them work, as a pairing. So, thank you. ♥

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1363 September 25 2006, 04:11:07 UTC
Wth. I love this hardcoar, and I don't even know whose point of view it's from unless I missed something. You're tricky like that.

♥ moar plz.

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:30:36 UTC
Well, I know who's point of view it is, if that helps at all. I suspect not, but I can tell you if you really want to know.

♥ (Maybe I'll finish the other thing soon I hope I hope I hope.)

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ladypurr September 25 2006, 04:14:53 UTC
Ohhhh....I just read a MinSu...and liked it. You have accomplished miracles you don't even know about. *bows down* Such wonderful images and so very sensual it made me squirm in my seat and wonder if someone had turned up the heater. Please write more!

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:32:17 UTC
Not a fan of MinSu? There don't seem to be very many, from what I can tell. I'm happy to show you that it can work! Thank you for the comment. :D

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clicheterms September 25 2006, 05:37:46 UTC
i can't see minsu,
i can't, i can't.
'cept, y'know, that one part in tokyo holiday.
but thatsit.
yet..you make them so very real
*weeps at teh beauty*

You’re straddling his lap and he’s sitting in your chair, one hand grasping at the keyboard like a lifeline, fingers pressing down key sequences that make no sense, and the other is in your hair, tangling in dark strands grown too long.
the piano keys want me to inform you that they feel so abused, but i told them to shuttup &GUHHed *___*

<3 tiffo

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:34:57 UTC
Yeah, I don't think that very many people can see MinSu, but I can, so I'll do by best to convince those skeptics. :D I'm glad that you could see it, at least in this fic.

Ahahaha, the keys can go suck it and enjoy the show. :D Thanks for the comment!

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