Those first few paragraphs really sucked me in. I love how when you describe things, you do it without much description. Usually description helps you visualize better, but I love the way you do it more, because it has his airy... aura about it. Nnngh. That makes no sense.
This hits me hard because I actually really know what Kibum is going through. It happened to me. Excluding the OT3 factor, I felt almost exactly the same, and the way you describe every little thing just makes my heart crumble into bits. Kibum's pain feels... so raw, so real.
People fall in love, and you may hate it, but there’s nothing you can do about it. You’re just going to have to accept that.
That is so. So true. Ow.
I have nothing else to say, because this is fucking amazing. I think you're probably my idol. I would quote all my favourite parts, but that's everything. Absolutely everything.
Story, meet Memories. Memories, meet this fanfuckingtabulous story.
Wow. I don't know what to say besides thank you. I wasn't sure about this, especially because it's a long piece to write in the second person, so I'm glad that the description is easy to read and understand.
I don't actually have firsthand experience, and so I just feel relieved to know that it's realistic. I always worry about being melodramatic or wangsty. I'm sorry that this has to happen to anyone where OT3 isn't an option. Thank you so much for the comment.
um. hi i came back to say, you rock my socks. i don't even know if i can coem up with a comment that makes any sense. like..aklsjfdioewqyr9iewhrkjds OMFG this was SO UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING,i feel like i should pay you or something XD falling in love with a woman and having a million tiny Kibum babies that made me giggle XD
Thank you. I do speak the language of the keyboard mash, as I use it quite frequently. I'm so glad that you like it, and thank you for reading. (And ahaha, I amused myself with that line, I'm glad I'm not the only one :D)
My first complaint is why the fuck aren’t you entering this into the contest? Second: Can you tell the lady up there that you get happy sparkles when you're first? At least, some people do; no, I'm not trying to start an argument. Third: Writing like this makes me look at my own shit and go, "Why the fuck am I not making sandwiches instead? Fourth: When you write me my YunChun, I am going to print it out and paste it on my wall and go, "Lookie here, bitches, +&- wrote this all for me. MINE MINE MINE MINE." And then I'm going to look at what I wrote you back and go, "Why the fuck am I embarrassing myself like this?" Fifth: I think I already own your first born, so would you like to own mine in return?
Anyway, I'm going to be for real now. The angst was so very... poignant and ... what's the word ... the opposite of dilute GAH concentrated? I mean, it wasn't like "weepy" but it was so very much deeper. And I don’t know what I'm saying. Let me just shut up before I make a large babbling fool of myself and say - goodness, woman, please
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I have never seen you swear so much at one time. This is like. History. This goes in my book of "Nhahahaca's Achievements '06", beside the "Overusing the '*_*' face" entry.
-giggles- I feel absolutely terrible for spamming +&-'s post like this, but tis life. I am very glad you're proud of me. Ever since I started smutting, my mouth has been going off lykwhoa. ♥
I'm as proud as a proud thing, my little orc princess. ♥♥ Excuse me while I pick my brain out from the gutter, because I was just about to ask you what your mouth has been going off on.
*~* That was love. And not for the sex. The sex was vague. Which is...actually usually how I like it. *~* The characterization, though. and so much EMOTION. My gods. I just...can't take it. There was a very well developed plot here. And you made it realistic. A threesome like that really would be very difficult to handle. But you also get a point across -- that sometimes one perfect moment is all that matters. I like how you managed to fix that in there, because I wasn't sure what that paragraph about sixth grade was there for. *~* My Gods. You are a wonderful writer. Please keep contributing. *~*
Thank you! I don't really write the porn, I am too easily embarrassed. Maybe one day! Maybe. I'm glad that the characterizations made sense, and that the plot seemed well thought out. I can only imagine how hard it would be to actually get a threesome to really work.
The paragraph in sixth grade was just sort of to show the relationship between Siwon and Kibum and how they told each other everything (secrets and such). That's about it. Thank you so much for reading, and for the praise. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Okay, I'm back. That was amazing. *totally already said that XD* I want to cry reading it again just because it's so beautiful. I actually loved the timeline, how it skips back and forth and you can see how it is in the present and what started it all and AGH. ♥ The dynamics, they work so WELL, but you show so well that their relationship still isn't perfect. Because if a pair can have so many problems in a relationship, shouldn't it be obvious that being in a trio would be even more difficult? I loved the characterizations and the emotions and how each of the three differ and how they complement each other. Agh. *flails happily*
... Now I so don't want to write my Shihanchul. XDDDDDDDDD
Thank you, gah. And I'm glad that the timeline makes sense, because my brain started in the middle and worked out in both directions and I'm not quite used to that. But it was a lot of fun to write, and I'm really happy that you like it and that it makes sense. ♥
Exactly! Yes, exactly, because just two people is hard enough to work out, and then you add a third and everything gets so much more complicated. And yay, thank you.
...You totally should. DO IT. There is never enough threesome. :D
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This hits me hard because I actually really know what Kibum is going through. It happened to me. Excluding the OT3 factor, I felt almost exactly the same, and the way you describe every little thing just makes my heart crumble into bits. Kibum's pain feels... so raw, so real.
People fall in love, and you may hate it, but there’s nothing you can do about it. You’re just going to have to accept that.
That is so. So true. Ow.
I have nothing else to say, because this is fucking amazing. I think you're probably my idol. I would quote all my favourite parts, but that's everything. Absolutely everything.
Story, meet Memories. Memories, meet this fanfuckingtabulous story.
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I don't actually have firsthand experience, and so I just feel relieved to know that it's realistic. I always worry about being melodramatic or wangsty. I'm sorry that this has to happen to anyone where OT3 isn't an option. Thank you so much for the comment.
Memories? Really? Jesus, wow. alekjdf I'm really flattered, thank you.
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ps: Sorry about the spamming. I'll stop now, since I have time to recover as Nhaca whipes her spit chocolate milk off her monitor.
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i came back to say, you rock my socks. i don't even know if i can coem up with a comment that makes any sense. like..aklsjfdioewqyr9iewhrkjds OMFG
this was SO UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING,i feel like i should pay you or something XD
falling in love with a woman and having a million tiny Kibum babies that made me giggle XD
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Second: Can you tell the lady up there that you get happy sparkles when you're first? At least, some people do; no, I'm not trying to start an argument.
Third: Writing like this makes me look at my own shit and go, "Why the fuck am I not making sandwiches instead?
Fourth: When you write me my YunChun, I am going to print it out and paste it on my wall and go, "Lookie here, bitches, +&- wrote this all for me. MINE MINE MINE MINE." And then I'm going to look at what I wrote you back and go, "Why the fuck am I embarrassing myself like this?"
Fifth: I think I already own your first born, so would you like to own mine in return?
Anyway, I'm going to be for real now. The angst was so very... poignant and ... what's the word ... the opposite of dilute GAH concentrated? I mean, it wasn't like "weepy" but it was so very much deeper. And I don’t know what I'm saying. Let me just shut up before I make a large babbling fool of myself and say - goodness, woman, please ( ... )
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Yeah, hi coherence.
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The paragraph in sixth grade was just sort of to show the relationship between Siwon and Kibum and how they told each other everything (secrets and such). That's about it. Thank you so much for reading, and for the praise. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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... Now I so don't want to write my Shihanchul. XDDDDDDDDD
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Exactly! Yes, exactly, because just two people is hard enough to work out, and then you add a third and everything gets so much more complicated. And yay, thank you.
...You totally should. DO IT. There is never enough threesome. :D
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