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Title: Drowning
Fandom: DBSK
Pairing: YunChun
Rating: R?
Disclaimer: I don't own.
Summary: You walk to the liquor cabinet, pour yourself some scotch.
Notes: Second person. 1,300 words, even. Angsty and filled with alcohol. Pretty weird. Inspired by listening to No Children by The Mountain Goats far, far too many times.

Comments

[nagami_cabasa]

i'm not even a fan of the pairing but i liked this a lot. @.@ i love how you described their relationship as not a relatioship, as something undefinable because they're together yet not. and how yoochun always returned to his scotch. and how the alcohol is a big part of "whatever's going on between them".
... yeah i liked it a lot. the last paragraph made me go "egghhdjfh it started off so well awwww TT.TT" ^^;;;

[addandsubtract]

Thank you! I'm glad that you like it. It's very, uh, alcoholic. Thanks for the comment. :D

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ur ev0l

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You're eviler.

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i love scotch

scotchy scotch scotch

here it goes down

down into my belly

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I still don't know what that's from.

[addandsubtract]

Hee, thanks! I'm glad you like it. But, no, not JaeHo.

[serapheim]

I think it is one of the best YunChun, I read so far. *nods* To hell with the fact i dont like this pairing and dont know why the hell I joined this comm in the first place, this fic is BEAUTIFUL. Beautiful in some morbid way, beautiful in the reality it depicts, beautiful because I can see this all and it is so real and so-so good. The wording, the way you separated those passages, that ending.
I am adding this one to the memories.

I think that contrary to popular belief to write angst is harder than sap or happy fics. And to write a good angst, a good believable angst that makes a read go "woah!" is a real achievement. My congratulations. :)

Take care :3

[addandsubtract]

Wow, thank you so much, I'm really flattered. I'm just glad that you feel that it's realistic.

I agree that it's sometimes very hard to write angst, especially since there are just as many cliches for angsty writing as there are for any other genre. I'm happy you don't think this fic falls into that category!

[serapheim]

Yes, it was really good, so I am looking forward to reading more of your works. :)

[gado]

hoshit..

yunchun is more or less my favourite pairing but somehow it seems like they can never be happy. ahh. i loved how the ending was a flashback. also, i liked how your language is descriptive without being like.. uhm... argh.. to hell with the english language! XD
it's beautiful like empty hallways and car wrecks and not like flowers and meadows 8D

what song was it?

AND OH MY GOD DRAGOSTEA DIN TEI! ♥
gotta love o-zone (Arsenium x Anzej Dezan, dammit! XD)

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Oh, wow, thank you! YunChun is definitely one of my favorite pairings, as well, top two really. I agree that they seem to call for more angst than other pairings do. Who knows why, really? I'm glad that you like it, though, in all it's morbid-ness.

The song was No Children by The Mountain Goats. They are awesome, and this song is beautiful. Especially the lyrics.

YES I LOVE THIS SONG. I JUST WISH I COULD UNDERSTAND THEM. OR SING ALONG.

[gado]

and who is the other one in the top, then? XD
yeah they raelly do. though i've read one or two yunchun fluff fics

ah but beautiful songs calls for fic writing.

ME TOO! i don't understand shit but i sing along anyway! 8D
i was so happy when Arsenium from O-Zone was in the eurovision song contest ^^v the whole preformance kinda sucked but hey, it was him.

[addandsubtract]

My other OTP is MinSu. Because it is teh cuteness! :D

I think there are only, like, two YunChun fluff fics in existance, ahahaha.

I just end up making up words so that I can sing along. There is no way in hell that they're the right words, but whatever, I don't care. He was? Cool! I don't really know that much about the band, unfortunately. I haven't been listening that long. I think I should go find me some pictures. XD