May 26, 2004 01:20
So, me and brady had a poem contest. we were so bored, so we went at it. we wanna know who's is best. so fuckin post a comment on it yeah?
sixteen years old with
a girl i love so much
not following the rules,
disobeying my mother & such.
Going out with my friends
and having nothing but fun
Being with my girl
which i love a ton
Burks is always there
and will be till the end
so i think ill call him
my best-friend
Victoria is my girl and has
been since the 10th of May
To know she cares "I Love
you" is all she has to say.
Burks also is in love with stephanie
he acts as though her voice is a syphany
In this life of ours
we have to admitt
that friendship dont
compare to shit
searching and finding jobs together
think of money cant get any better
my boy burks is the best that could be
our dreams together we both could see
He never lets you down
unless your immature
so in that case you
cant be to sure
I dont have anything else to say
except im the best rhymer especially
in this month of may
so tell your boy brady whose the best
so you can set your boy adam to rest
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So brady came out with a very good story
but burks is here to soak up all the glory
he might have a few good words
but i'll still flick him two good birds
Remember who your dealing with
i'm a burks its no myth
i'll win this contest with no trouble
so brady im sorry to burst your bubble
you had some good lines, i wont lie
but now its a waste, and you'll just cry
i'll bust out the good shit, with not a care
you wont be able to come back, so sit and stare.
it's true, im in love with her
it seems so good, its all a blur
i wish i could hug her, and be with her now
but i just don't know how.
You got me good, with a few of them ryhmes.
i'll have your head ringing with my chimes
i'll beat anything you throw at me, with a straight face
i got this dawg, i won this race.
your not the best rhymer, you used the machine
i dont use the world wide web to own this scene
i straight up took this bitch right from your hands
so sit back and make yourself some new plans
if we had a trophy i'd done took that bitch
i'd sell it on ebay, and make myself rich
as i win this contest i'll take your pride
send it down the drain for a long ride.
you want to step to me once again
make sure you do it, using your brain
you can't do it, nothing to gain
i'll joke on you, and cause some pain.
I'll always be here to defend
i'll be there til the end.
No if and or buts about it.
i'll be your boy and ill sit and shout it
We are Best-Friends, like it should be
wouldn't want anyone else beside me
Just my boy brady keeping it straight.
we are the only ones that dont need to hate.
So as i win this contest
ha you said you were the best.
you can take a seat and sit like the rest
i just won, i hope your impressed
Now my Ending was so much better
i'm the best, with each letter
this is my freestyle from me to you
like i said i have nothing better to do :P