Unavailable - Chapter 17

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Title: Unavailable
Authors: bugs and aussie
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama, Humor
Rating: MA
Word Count: 2,600
Summary: Two determined women, one man, and a cup of tea.

Chapter Seventeen:

Comments

[mellow_mel]

squeeeeeee (snicker) squeeeee LOL

phonebooth sex! (reminded me a little of ladder shoot sex!) can't do that now a days! see how much we have lost with advanced technology? haha

that silly dog keeps giving clues:)

bridget NOOOO dont look, but don't take jake upstairs either!!!!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

phonebooth sex! (reminded me a little of ladder shoot sex!) can't do that now a days! see how much we have lost with advanced technology? haha You have no idea how many discussions we had over the location of said sex. 'They've already done it in the car (almost).' 'Laura Adams is not going to do it in an alleyway.' 'Well, Bill Adams wouldn't let her.' On and on it went...

Yes, poor Bridgette! Whatever she does, it's going to mean trouble!

[mellow_mel]

Bwahahaha, I love that you two discuss everything so thoroughly and make sure all the details match :D

It was nice to see more scenes with Lance and Jake, but when are we going to see them together? :P

Roni

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I wish we didn't talk about the smut quite so often! I cannot tell you how many times the letters TMI get typed!

Jake won't see Lance until he returns to the mansion. And we need to drag things out a little further to get to that point! :)

[newnumbertwo]

It seems like Carolanne's the one getting the "problem." That would be funny.

I'm ready for Carolanne to die now, please.

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Yes, the tea is working on her, I think!

I'm ready for Carolanne to die now, please. So bloodthirsty! *snort*

[newnumbertwo]

Yeah, my tolerance level reached its peak, on that front. I don't mind her when she's dead or alive and harmless, but when she's cockblocking, she needs to go.

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Ha! I sense we might need her around a little bit longer to torture our readers. :)

[afrakaday]

This is too funny. And I'm most impressed by the logistics of their phone room secksings. Boo to Bill's talk of an annulment!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

There were logistics of a closet in the apartment and the fire escape contemplated as well! LOL

Yes, the annulment talk really put a dampener on the funny secksing!

[lindy999]

Yayyyyyy an update. I've missed this story so much.

AND WHAT AN UPDATE!!!!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I know, I know. We're getting there! Damn crazy Battleship didn't help!

Glad you're sticking with us!

[lindy999]

Like I'd go anywhere...I'm just a little bit addicted to your writing :)

[bsg_aussiegirl]

♥

[marzipanilla]

/still rooting for Laura to get knocked up during one of these encounters

What? I figure it would do something to screw around with the marriage proceedings..

Oh Carolanne, you've never felt hot at all? To the point where you don't get what it means when you feel flushed anyway.. No wonder you're evil!

Oh Jake, you're supposed to keep people away from the booth when your masters are going at it. I'm hoping they'll be a loud bang somewhere else to distract her..

[bsg_aussiegirl]

LOL at your reasoning on why this should become a babyfic! :)

Hee. I think we may have given Carolanne a few too many issues now you've mentioned it... Oh well.

I love how everyone expects Jake to just know what he's supposed to do!

[marzipanilla]

LOL at your reasoning on why this should become a babyfic! :)

Well, how Laura would react to being a mother would be great too.. I see her being all 'and the nanny' and Bill just being 'nope, we are taking care of our baby'.

Hee. I think we may have given Carolanne a few too many issues now you've mentioned it... Oh well.

Some people are just one big issue.

I love how everyone expects Jake to just know what he's supposed to do!

He was smart enough not to eat a poisoned steak, I say that means he'd smart enough not to go near his masters when they smell like sex -laugh-

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Your talk of babyfic has sent my co-writer into some sort of tangent. I can't talk now. I have to talk her out of her silly plot ideas. :)