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Unavailable, Chapter 11

Jan 14, 2012 22:33

Title: Unavailable, Chapter 11
Authors: Bugs and Aussie
Rated: T
Genre: A/U, Romance, Drama
Word Count: 3,800
Chapter Summary: Bill takes Carolanne out to a restaurant, only to find an unexpected diner at the next table.

( I am Mrs Adams now, don't forget it. )

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alesia027 January 14 2012, 22:20:53 UTC

OMG Carolanne is Ellen all over again!!! Ellen was at least into booze and sex so Saul got to have a good time while being stomped on like a bug - but Bill - Holy Shit man grow a pair!! He would never let Laura be a bitch like that why is he letting Carolanne? Guilt? Duty? A combination of both? It just doesn't seem like enough to make him do this. This woman LEFT HIM AND THE BOYS (does anyone really believe the 'no memory' story??). I wonder what is finally going to break the back of this man when it comes to this $&*(#$* woman. Saul needs to go to Mexico to find out the truth. If Tom Zarek can find her, Saul can find out the truth of where she has been. She couldn't have been in a very good place since she came here to get the money.

I can see (and expect) for Bill to send Young Jaffe home with the car ASAP, I can't believe he has kept it this long.

There is NO WAY Bill is going to let or allow Laura to buy his freedom - that's really what Laura is taking about. If he wouldn't let her buy him clothes, she can forget buying out his 'wife' to make her go away.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

bsg_aussiegirl January 14 2012, 23:50:19 UTC

man grow a pair!! He would never let Laura be a bitch like that why is he letting Carolanne? Guilt? Duty? A combination of both? It just doesn't seem like enough to make him do this. *hugs Bill* We are using his sense of duty to the hilt in this plotline, otherwise there would be no story! I think there is also a sense that he gave into Carolanne to some extent (we did have him hiding the money from her in an earlier fic) which has become a habit. I imagine he did it for the boys' sake. I'm sure though, that he won't let her lead him around completely by the nose. That's for Laura!

Will Carolanne take Laura's offer? Will Saul go to Mexico? Tune in to see! :)

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