Fic: Two at the End of the World (1/1)

Dec 02, 2006 20:17

Title: Two at the End of the World
Characters: Lee, Adama, Adama/Roslin
Timeline: Set an indeterminate time after "Hero." S3 speculation.
Rating: PG-13.
WC: 1,900
Summary: Lee shares a drink with his father.
A/N: Many thanks to my faithful beta midsummernd for wrangling pronouns and calming nerves, and to ohsmartone28 for a timely suggestion on the ending.

Two at the End of the World )

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pocketwitch December 3 2006, 02:56:15 UTC
This was very, very well done. Excellent interplay between the Adamas. I also adore the question of whether Lee is attracted to Kara for her sweeping gestures. Excellent observation.

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

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gabolange December 3 2006, 03:12:27 UTC
Aww, thank you!

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qill13 December 3 2006, 03:26:18 UTC
This is lovely--thanks for sharing it!

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gabolange December 3 2006, 03:37:45 UTC
Thank you!

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starbuck92 December 3 2006, 04:30:24 UTC
Aw. Very nice.

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gabolange December 3 2006, 04:45:07 UTC
Aw. Thank you!

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annlynnmarie December 3 2006, 06:22:34 UTC
Wow. Wonderfully written. Loved it!

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gabolange December 3 2006, 15:02:39 UTC
Thanks so much!

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yharel December 3 2006, 06:41:58 UTC
Wow, that was so good. Very well written.

I loved this line, The admiral shrugs, again a slight gesture, and for a man of such stature and personality he has such slight gestures - it's so true!

Bill isn't a man of many words (until he starts making his big Adama Speech (TM)) and he gets his point across without need for words, and I think you used that so very well.

Lee feeling still like a child in his father's presence even though he is the CAG and was the Commander of the Pegasus is so realistic, especially since his dad is Admiral Adama, the all-time hero.

Very well done! Thank you for sharing :)

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gabolange December 3 2006, 15:03:13 UTC
Thank you! And yeah, if Bill would just stop giving speeches . . . ::grin::

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yharel December 3 2006, 15:14:47 UTC
Actually I love Bill!Speeches, they always have that pointed meaning that was missing in the episode. Anyway, his speeches contain more words than he says through the whole episode usually so they're fine :)

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gabolange December 3 2006, 15:40:47 UTC
Ah, that makes sense. Whether I like his speeches depends on the context, and I think this past episode's speech just made me go, "WHAT?!" But he can always be counted on to have a word or fifty for his men, and I enjoy that because I expect it.

<3s Bill.

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