Another short story

[adam_epp]

Hmm, I shouldn't have written this. I should have been writing an essay. I don't understand this inspiration that seems only to strike when other matters are so much more pressing than fanfiction.

I'm still waiting for any inspiration to write essays to strike whenever I read any poetry. I suspect I may need to wait a long time for that.

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[sequora]

Ohhh, how sad for Hisana. But you do bring up a good point that I forgot concerning Bleach. After the soul dies, where do they go? Every, what was it, 75 years (?) they re-incarnate right? Maybe I have that wrong. Either way, this story just brings back memories from SS arc (I miss this arc) and that horrible first movie where they talked about souls being lost and stuck between SS and the living.

But anyway, I've not read a story from you in a long time and this one is good. I feel bad for Hisana, Rukia, and Byakuya (I don't think I spelt his name right -__-). I also miss the ghost in Bleach. It's as if after the first arc, they just disappeared. I guess because as the story progressed, Kubo wanted to make them more alive and present than the other realm. Over half of Bleach is fought/taken place with dead people (Bruce Willis not included or that kid), and maybe he's just transitioning every one into what Ichigo's and Bleach's story is.

I just wish he'd bring back some mystery. I enjoyed learning about each ghost and especially Rukia, how Chad and Orihime got their powers, etc. Kubo hasn't touched based on any of those things since SS ended. Either that, or I've just not been caught up on the manga properly.

Anyway, great job on the story. I really liked how you wrote it to convey Hisana's feeling. I felt bad for her. She's trapped in this void of nothingness yet can see and almost live as if she were alive. Crazy. *shudders*

But yeah, great job! :o)

[adam_epp]

Hmm, I was under the impression that souls re-incarnate immediately after they die (I "forgot" that when I wrote this). But I like the idea of Hisana being a ghost, seeing as how she died before seeing her sister. She seems the sort to have ghostly regret.

Thanks for another comment!