It's Here!

[adaliseranis]

A chapter and a half because, as I said before, I got stuck on what was originally meant to be Chapter 7, so I just axed the whole thing. What remains is still here, however, since it does happen -- it just doesn't justify an entire chapter. What am I getting at? Well...

All Their Sins
Chapter 7: Idolatry
Rating: Mature
Notes: Un-edited like woah, but

Comments

[geuna]

You have good timing. Got your reply just as I started re-reading! XD

So what was originally in chapter 7 if the theme was still "idolatry"?

This Maidu is totally a Devil Fruit user, isn't he? I can't remember if that was mentioned at another time, though I need to do some rereading. It really makes me wonder what the guy LOOKS like... unless it's actually a girl somehow and you've lead us on. Either way, what does a self proclaimed Dionysus look like?

At LAST, someone realizes who someone is. I expected a bit more awe when it comes to Zoro, though. I cheered when Zoro kicked that guy in the face, he really had it coming. But now what are the chances of someone else figuring out who Nami and Sanji really are? What would they even do with that knowledge?

I suspect Annie is the name Nami is using for the time being? She seems to be doing well, considering... but she is bound to meet Maidu soon, and who knows what that will mean.

Zoro in a DEATH MATCH? Somehow I can't see this as a problem for him. Even without swords, he can cuts things, take people out... unless he's drugged...

And Sanji... well, I don't know what's become of Sanji! I am worried that they might find out just how flexible he is. XD Their brains would explode. Bad, bad me...

[adaliseranis]

The chapter which was originally meant to be Chapter 7 (the Nami segment, as I'm sure you guessed) was called Idolatry. The Zoro segment was to be called Blasphemy. But the two have enough overlap that I just took the word I liked better.

Of course Zoro's not worried about a death match. Maybe he should be... (cue evil laughter) Anyway, I'm going to stop dropping hints and just say "you'll see." Soon, I hope.

Yep, 'Annie' is Nami's name for now (I like it because that's her name in Romance Dawn).

[geuna]

(dying from anticipation) Aw, man, you're such a tease! ^_~

How that only leaves Sanji. He ended up in Shang-tu as well, right? But what does that mean for him? He's totally pretty enough for the brothel, and there WAS one guy their already... But is their might still be a chance he could be a part of the death match, too? What if he and Zoro have to fight!?

Ooooo, so much to CONSIDER!