It's Here!

[adaliseranis]

A chapter and a half because, as I said before, I got stuck on what was originally meant to be Chapter 7, so I just axed the whole thing. What remains is still here, however, since it does happen -- it just doesn't justify an entire chapter. What am I getting at? Well...

All Their Sins
Chapter 7: Idolatry
Rating: Mature
Notes: Un-edited like woah, but

Comments

[geuna]

I pick the best-and I mean THE BEST time to decide to check my f-list before bed. (GLEE!) I was just thinking about this fic yesterday! XD

Shall comment again tomorrow after I have time to truly dissect this, and it's not 3 a.m... (skips off to bed)

[adaliseranis]

Really? Wow... I probably would have forgotten about it if it weren't my own story. It's been so long... *sweatdrop*

[geuna]

You have good timing. Got your reply just as I started re-reading! XD

[adaliseranis]

The chapter which was originally meant to be Chapter 7 (the Nami segment, as I'm sure you guessed) was called Idolatry. The Zoro segment was to be called Blasphemy. But the two have enough overlap that I just took the word I liked better.

Of course Zoro's not worried about a death match. Maybe he should be... (cue evil laughter) Anyway, I'm going to stop dropping hints and just say "you'll see." Soon, I hope.

Yep, 'Annie' is Nami's name for now (I like it because that's her name in Romance Dawn).

[nonoji]

omigoood!!!!!! An update!! You have no idea how happy I am. On second thought, you probably do. lol

So now all three are captured, Nami seems to Have A Plan, Zoro is getting the information, Sanji I'm assuming is still drugged... It's buiding up, they've all got their own situations to deal with, and God, I can't wait for the next chapter now~

[adaliseranis]

Everyone seems to like drugging Sanji. Poor boy -- it's going to make his head explode or turn him a funny colour one of these days.

I'm really glad you liked it ^__^

[gryffindorsnake]

Wow. I usually skip over most of the fanfic posts but man, am I glad I checked this one out. You're very good at describing emotions and thoughts and whatnot. It's very compelling to read, especially when it's Sanji's POV. Also, this is some really interesting plot you've come up with. Although I have to admit that when I read the parts mentioning the Straw Hat cosplay and the Atrium, I got this great sense of 'WTF?'. But not in a bad way though. I'm really interested in seeing how all this fits together.

I really hope I don't miss the next chapter. =D

[adaliseranis]

You know that WTF feeling you get when something seems to have written itself into a story? Yeah, the first cosplay bit was definitely one of those for me. So I totally understand what you mean -- it's not something that would normally be planned into a story (and here, it wasn't).

I'm glad you checked this one out too ^_^